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Velvet Sky

velvet sky--
star burns through canopy 
leaves black hole

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 10:14:00 AM

VERY.... AWESOME..... HI.. HELLO... HALLO.... AND THANK YOU FOR THE POST CARD... YOU ARE SO SWEET... HUGS... TO YOU...P.D.

Elaine George

Date: 7/7/2011 3:15:00 PM

Awesome Haiku, Niknuk. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. lAINIE

Date: 7/5/2011 2:05:00 PM

Thought provoking poem with a wonderful use of imagery. Thank you for sharing it with us. Soup mail coming shortly. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/5/2011 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Niknuk ! in Chris's "Pseudo-Haiku" contest. Love, Carol

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/4/2011 7:28:00 PM

awesome write , NIKNUK ! hehehe...so wonderful penned art is this one...so, of course, what di we expect from a great poet... ^_^ junjun ( san ka sa pilipinas?)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/4/2011 3:13:00 PM

hmmmm thought provoking and tactile! Congrad's Light & Love

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/3/2011 6:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. It's a beauty!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/3/2011 1:00:00 PM

I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Nikko : )

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/3/2011 10:20:00 AM

Congrats to you Nikko!!! An amazing write and you have mastered the Haiku all the while impressing Chris on all sides....hugs and a kiss on your cheek!! Michael

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 7/3/2011 8:52:00 AM

congrats on your deserved big win in the contest, you really excel at these haiku, well done :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/3/2011 12:03:00 AM

Hi Nikko,congrats on your win...enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 9:48:00 PM

Nikko, finally I am seeing your haiku. sorry it took me so long. wow, you did FANTASTIC with this one. And what a cool way to explain the black hole theory on a beautiful velvet sky! I completely forgot to recheck my snowman haiku but I got to thinking why I never used snow in the second line. It's because it was repeating the word snow after using it in line 1. wEll, do a victory dance with Kash and constance now! Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/2/2011 7:55:00 PM

congrats sweet friend on your dynamic win ...velvet sky is tops luv... my flourishing fields drowned oh... sending fireworks to u from seashore tonight luv..