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velvet sky

velvet sky-- star burns through canopy leaves black hole

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/21/2011 10:14:00 AM
VERY.... AWESOME..... HI.. HELLO... HALLO.... AND THANK YOU FOR THE POST CARD... YOU ARE SO SWEET... HUGS... TO YOU...P.D.
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Date: 7/7/2011 3:15:00 PM
Awesome Haiku, Niknuk. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. lAINIE
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:05:00 PM
Thought provoking poem with a wonderful use of imagery. Thank you for sharing it with us. Soup mail coming shortly. Karen
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Niknuk ! in Chris's "Pseudo-Haiku" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 7:28:00 PM
awesome write , NIKNUK ! hehehe...so wonderful penned art is this one...so, of course, what di we expect from a great poet... ^_^ junjun ( san ka sa pilipinas?)
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Date: 7/4/2011 3:13:00 PM
hmmmm thought provoking and tactile! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/3/2011 6:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. It's a beauty!
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Date: 7/3/2011 1:00:00 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Nikko : )
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congrats to you Nikko!!! An amazing write and you have mastered the Haiku all the while impressing Chris on all sides....hugs and a kiss on your cheek!! Michael
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:52:00 AM
congrats on your deserved big win in the contest, you really excel at these haiku, well done :)
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Date: 7/3/2011 12:03:00 AM
Hi Nikko,congrats on your win...enjoyed.
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Date: 7/2/2011 9:48:00 PM
Nikko, finally I am seeing your haiku. sorry it took me so long. wow, you did FANTASTIC with this one. And what a cool way to explain the black hole theory on a beautiful velvet sky! I completely forgot to recheck my snowman haiku but I got to thinking why I never used snow in the second line. It's because it was repeating the word snow after using it in line 1. wEll, do a victory dance with Kash and constance now! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:55:00 PM
congrats sweet friend on your dynamic win ...velvet sky is tops luv... my flourishing fields drowned oh... sending fireworks to u from seashore tonight luv..
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:15:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of chris, nikko
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Date: 7/2/2011 5:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:00:00 AM
distinct poetic voice, nikks.. if for a contest, a whooty win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:51:00 PM
Again fantastic imagery with apt images,nikko
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:40:00 AM
Very nice imagery here....Enjoyed.I think you have entered the other one for Chris's contest.
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Date: 6/29/2011 8:57:00 AM
I love your second line Missy, is this for Chris' contest? If so, wishing you all the best.. I am so amazed you actually wrote just one hehe ;D
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