Velvet As Laughter - Blitz

gray day
gray velvet
velvet pillows
velvet cheeks
cheeks flushed
cheeks pale white
white as snow
white as paper
paper cranes
paper boats
boats which sail ponds
boats reflected
reflected from clouds forms
forms made by children
forms diminutive
diminutive fingers
diminutive toes
toes cool in the water
toes nibbled 
nibbled peanut butter sandwiches
nibbled blueberries
blueberry skies
blueberry tongues
tongues of storm
tongues of rain
rain on the lashes
rain on the grass
grass covered in droplets
grass Kelly green
green luscious in low light
green wet and clean
clean as the storm crossed day
clean as an oragami lily
lily of the valley
lily sweet the day
day of cool quietude
day subtle and warm
warm as hot caramel
warm as your arms
arms strong
arms engulfing
engulfing the sky and earth
engulfing the passive scene
scene full of storm clouds now
scene of umbrella laughter
laughter of children pink-cheeked 
laughter in sapphire eyes
eyes mischievous
mischievous
eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/31/2014 2:35:00 PM
Debbie this looks like a very fun form, you did well...David
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Date: 7/31/2014 1:30:00 AM
ah diminutive fingers! had to break out my thesaurus! This poem has PIZAZZZ! By the way, you are always spot on in your analysis of my poems. I can't believe it. How do you do it? Even the abstract ones. You may be the Poet Whisperer!
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Date: 7/28/2014 2:15:00 PM
Wow loved it great style and idea, well done. Pete.
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:50:00 PM
You took me on a ride, Debbie!! Yummy things to nibble...lovely things to feel..beautiful imagery... :) Thanks for sharing!!
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