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velvet

If you doubt there’s real evil in the world 
try gluten-free pizza - it’s a super low-value experience
imagine something criminal, like pizza on a cracker.

Which highlights the problematic nature of live-forever nutrition.
Who’d want to live forever - if that’s what you had to eat?

Ok let’s wax poetic..

Our night of Friday unfolded against a black background
for the thinning wind-moon was a coin already spent.

Oh, it still hung sharp in orbit and still called to obedient waters,
and, when it could, it patterned the trees and hills with a pale spectral light, 

but lovers, who unwisely looked to it as a heavenly witness of their love  - mere hours ago - had to admit that the unearthly lampion, was unshapely shrinking behind the silver edged clouds.

Ask not for the night to answer for day or even ever-constant stay
for the moon is but a brief pulse, an intermittent flashlight on night’s black velvet.

Wax off…

Peter and I reserve Friday nights for getting stupid. We’re developing regular urban nightlife haunts - like the Gate club and Palais Maillot. 

But if you go, book ahead and plan on paying extra for a VIP zone or the mezzanines, otherwise - god - you’ll end up in the thrashing mob - and you can order-in food in VIP areas.

This will sound crazy - and I don’t know why - but jammed, swirling-lazer-lit clubs make me think of human trafficking - I’d never go to a club alone.
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A song for this:
Daft Punk Is Playing at My House by LCD Soundsystem
The Moon Cave (feat. Asha Puthli) by Gorillaz
mangetout (The Dare remix) by Wet Leg
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Fallica Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 1:20 PM
Hi. Guess who's back? Ten pieces? I'll catch up. V- / <3
Vionet Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 6:38 PM
You haven’t had time to sail the seven seas.. all 7, have you?
Parker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 9:15 PM
"...called to obedient waters..." STELLAR!!!!
Vionet Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 5:18 AM
Thanks Arlo. =]
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