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Velvet Premiere Contest Winner

"The velvet veins running through my deep-coloured wings sing blues, remembering the non-existent maple memories, lighting up my heart's frosty rays." ~ Deepali Singhvi The soft folds of velvet enclose her slim body as she ambles across the woods in tearful throes; Wrapped in velvet, on she rambles in whispers of ache that perturb her feelings that are in shambles; Her saunter's like a healing herb that relieves her from her sorrow, Here, there's no one else to disturb; She follows a path that's narrow, sits beside a well-worn headstone, cries as if there is no morrow; Slowly, she sighs sitting alone, Unlocks a velvet box and takes a black velvet rose to bemoan; Places it there, her body shakes with deep anguish for whom she lost, "I'll love you always", her voice breaks; Walking back, she's like velvet frost, Wishing their love were not star-crossed.

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Date: 8/16/2023 10:47:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Jo :) - hugs
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Date: 8/14/2023 1:42:00 PM
Jo, your words ache with sorrow and grieving in black velvet. Your poem is sensual yet so sorrowful! Nicely done! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 8/14/2023 10:24:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Jo
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Date: 8/14/2023 8:49:00 AM
Your "Velvet" is a lovely write. I love velvet fabric but do not see it much anymore. Have a great day............
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Date: 8/13/2023 7:14:00 PM
Very emotive ! Can feel the depth of her sorrow. The fate of these star crossed lovers makes our hearts ache in sorrow ! Well done. Congratulations Joanna.
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Date: 8/13/2023 4:30:00 AM
So beautiful and amazing - words like a breath of light, poured out over the frosty dawn... excruciatingly beautiful - A fave. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/12/2023 12:12:00 PM
Striking imagery, Jo, I see a dark forbidding forest and the branches that snag on her velvet robe, and the dark rose she leaves, also the closing lines of 'velvet frost' so poignant and solemn~
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Date: 8/11/2023 7:15:00 AM
Aah, reminds me a bit of my poem Swim. Star-crossed lovers. I love how you weave a velvety theme throughout giving color and texture to your words
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Date: 8/11/2023 6:25:00 AM
A poignant write Jo, Well penned
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Date: 8/11/2023 4:45:00 AM
- Beautiful with feelings, Jo - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Date: 8/10/2023 11:51:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Well done.
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