Velcro Shoes

I hardly ever wear shoes that tie.
My wife will tell you, I never lie.
Velcro shoes are my game.
I love them without shame.
If they stopped making them, I would cry.




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Sponsor S K A T * 
Contest Name SHOES
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:26 PM
..CONGRATULATIONS ~ IN THE SHOE CONTEST... I THINK every title is aweome.. ;-) Have a wonderful NIGHT, GOD BLESS,..P.D.
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:25 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Yes, comes a time we have to learn to love things a little different..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Congrats Cecil on a wonderful win in the Shoes contest.. nice write my friend..luv..
Taylor Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Congrats, Cecil. Excellent piece. Stick with the velcro, it's a shoo-in. All the best. Ralph
A  Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 10:35 PM
CECILE~ SORRY ABOUT THE DELAY~ CONGRATULATIONS!~ in my shoe contest~LUV*SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 12:08 PM
This is really nice job of limericking, Cecil. I wish the best for it in the contest. Luv ,Andrea
A   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:08 PM
my choice for my kids when they where young.. only because i was to lazy to tie their shoes..... good luck in the contest..,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:06 PM
Another awesome write Cecil and much good luck in the contest my friend.. feel the glow of those velcro shoes luv..
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Nice humorous write on velcro shoes
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 3:12 PM
You have a nice limerick poem for SKAT's contest. Just make one correction in your first line: Your word "where" should be "wear". Everything else looks fine.
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