Veiled Vision of Beauty

Veiled vision of beauty
     mystique of disguise
   mysterious glances
     flash from her eyes 

   Hold captive men's hearts
     breathless anticipation
   of erogenous zones ~
     unbridled temptation
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Baker Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 4:34 PM
The mystery is the lure. Well written, Gershon. Have a great week my friend! Bill
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 7:30 PM
A veiled woman = A lure even better than worms or popcorn! ~ Eyes of the Fisherman
Lawless Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 12:51 PM
"erogenous zones"....used to be called the "Combat Zone" in Boston
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 3:28 PM
All's fair in Love and War, eh, John?! Ha, ha. Love your comments. Keep 'em comin'!
Sambourne Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 9:40 PM
Beauty that brings forth passion. What a superb write, Gershon. All the best to you + your prolific pen. Sincerely, Brian
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Gosh, thanks for the enthusiasm, Brian! Faith and Strength, Gershon
George Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 9:14 PM
Beauty when veiled has a mysterious charm!
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 3:29 PM
The veil is the intrigue, methinks. :) gw
Kyser Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 8:04 PM
Unbridled? You looking at race horses again?
Wolf Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 8:12 PM
Couldn't resist that black beauty in the 8th stall, Jeff. ~ Mr. Ed
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