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No more fish please give us popcorn, it's more nourishing good for newborns! Give us popcorn no more nonveg, good for newborns veg advantage! No more nonveg give us sweet mom, veg advantage we should transform! Give us sweet mom fresh green cabbage, we should transform nonveg to veg! Fresh green cabbage it's more nourishing, nonveg to veg no more fish please! © kash poet( 2nd August 2011) ==============000=============== Placement: 3rd;(August 2011) Contest:Pure thoughts on Nature (Photo based) Sponsor:John Freeman

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Date: 8/7/2011 7:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! --Lori
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Date: 8/4/2011 1:26:00 PM
Kashinath, Interesting take on the theme. Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2011 9:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2011 7:00:00 PM
Hi Kash, popcorn is my passion with lottsa butter! Great verse with an interesting style!
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:58:00 PM
Congrats Kash on an ever too cool piece of poetry and a great big winner too .. a superb write my friend..as I said before luv..
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Date: 8/3/2011 6:54:00 PM
your veggies won, kashi, cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:51:00 PM
So cute, is this!! Sounds like my own family....popcorn is more delightful than 'real food' !!
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Date: 8/3/2011 3:06:00 PM
That was great. You blew me away! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/3/2011 4:19:00 AM
a unique approach for the theme, kashi.. winning luck!! come visit! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 8/3/2011 2:50:00 AM
nice poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/3/2011 12:55:00 AM
hey this is sure different from you. A cool take on the baby eagles picture, Kash. How are you doing today?
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:54:00 PM
how clever ..what a cool Pantoum..Kash and luv the newborn baby as the main character..but alas I am a veggie lover..oh.. a vegan if u please..oh.. good luck in the contest..my friend..
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Date: 8/2/2011 2:44:00 PM
Cute interpertation of the picture..Enjoyed reading..Got a chuckle..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:58:00 AM
LOL, witty piece, Kash
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