Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

Veg Advantage

No more fish please
give us popcorn,
it's more nourishing
good for newborns!

Give us popcorn
no more nonveg,
good for newborns
veg advantage!

No more nonveg
give us sweet mom,
veg advantage
we should transform!

Give us sweet mom
fresh green cabbage,
we should transform
nonveg to veg!

Fresh green cabbage
it's more nourishing,
nonveg to veg
no more fish please!






© kash poet( 2nd August 2011)
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Placement: 3rd;(August 2011)

Contest:Pure thoughts on Nature (Photo based)

Sponsor:John Freeman

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Sara Kendrick August 7, 2011 at 7:25 PM Congrats on your win..Sara

Lori Lucas Mcclure August 4, 2011 at 9:59 PM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!! --Lori

John Freeman August 4, 2011 at 1:26 PM Kashinath, Interesting take on the theme. Loved it , right on que, congratulations on your worthy poem's presentation. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 9:52 AM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Pure Thoughts On Nature" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley August 3, 2011 at 7:00 PM Hi Kash, popcorn is my passion with lottsa butter! Great verse with an interesting style!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 6:58 PM Congrats Kash on an ever too cool piece of poetry and a great big winner too .. a superb write my friend..as I said before luv..

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2011 at 6:54 PM your veggies won, kashi, cheery congrats on your splendid win! : ) huggs!

Carrie Richards August 3, 2011 at 3:51 PM So cute, is this!! Sounds like my own family....popcorn is more delightful than 'real food' !!

John Monteblanco August 3, 2011 at 3:06 PM That was great. You blew me away! Good luck in the contest.

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2011 at 4:19 AM a unique approach for the theme, kashi.. winning luck!! come visit! :) huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A August 3, 2011 at 2:50 AM nice poem,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2011 at 12:55 AM hey this is sure different from you. A cool take on the baby eagles picture, Kash. How are you doing today?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 2, 2011 at 3:54 PM how clever ..what a cool Pantoum..Kash and luv the newborn baby as the main character..but alas I am a veggie lover..oh.. a vegan if u please..oh.. good luck in the contest..my friend..

Sara Kendrick August 2, 2011 at 2:44 PM Cute interpertation of the picture..Enjoyed reading..Got a chuckle..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Jack Horne August 2, 2011 at 9:58 AM LOL, witty piece, Kash