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Vatican Incident - Limerick

Vatican Incident - Limerick A young maiden dressed like a mannequin Snuck into the church at the Vatican To curse at the pontiff So they called the sheriff She would not be invited back again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/22/2014 9:31:00 AM
Poor maiden..I hope things got better for her..Very creative work..Thanks for the visit by my page and finding some good points from my work..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2014 10:02:00 AM
Hi Sarah, Thanks! The maiden just needs a little more church and a little less curse. On the subject of your work; true is true. Your work is true. Have a great week end. Earl
Date: 11/20/2014 5:54:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It was like assembling a puzzle without enough words or parts. I wanted the girl to "curse" and "do worse" "strip" and end up suffer repentance or at least do penance for her sins, but it didn't work out this time. Maybe next time. Have a pleasant night. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/20/2014 4:22:00 PM
very clever write Earl:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2014 5:56:00 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. It was like assembling a puzzle without enough words or parts. I wanted the girl to "curse" and "do worse" "strip" and end up suffer repentance or at least do penance for her sins, but it didn't work out this time. Maybe next time. Have a pleasant night. Take care. Earl