Vasfade

Dry light sprinkled into grey clouds. Sweet air muffled the sounds. Tan raspberry leaves glisten in the breeze. Stainless golden fields come alive leaving breath behind. Blink a glimmer I started to cry. Dust left in the sand an endless cascade soon revealed vasfade. sky

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Ronald A. Williams

Date: 8/4/2017 8:37:00 PM

Not quite there in the alphabetical format of an ABC poem. More of a prose and Free Verse.

Jason Jenkins
Date: 8/4/2017 9:14:00 PM

Sorry I'm not so familiar with how they label writings. Rhetoric ,prose, and praise is the style I'm after. I have to get familiar on terms of compositions. Thanks again.