Vasava - An Untold Story 9/Many

Vasava –An Untold story                                                          9/Many


Lots and lots of people of Patilputra* and of Magadh
Were assembling in the beautiful court of Magadh

A group of singers were singing a chorus song
Be in life like Bharata* the brother of Rama
Who never tried to establish him as a king, although 
Rama gave him his entire kingdom for fourteen years, but Bharata*
Ruled in Ram’s absence, without using any royal powers for his own 

Over joyed by the feelings and happiness of the day
All the citizens of Magadh were singing 
And playing the musical instruments and drums
While denouncing Ravana  as a tyrant and demon king
Who had committed atrocities on the people of Bharat*

The presence of king Udiyan* in the ceremony
Had made the occasion more charming and attractive
To see only this handsome king of Ujjain’s kingdom
Lots and lots of citizens of Patilputra* and Magadh*
Were assembling in the beautiful court of Magadh

Candles were burning in colored chandeliers and glass lamps
Spreading their beautiful lights in the darkness of night
In the shaking flames of the burning candles
Happiness was showering on the Palace of Magadh
But a rare light was also spreading from the beauty of Vasava


Ravindra                                                                  to continue in 10

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Kanpur   India   20th March 2010 

*Lord Rama*	                Lord Rama is one of the most commonly adored gods of 
                                                Hindus and is known as an ideal man and hero of the epic 
                                                Ramayana
*Bharata                                   Bharata  is a legendary king of Aryan tribes in Hindu 
                                                mythology. He was the first to conquer all of Greater India, 
                                                uniting it into a single entity which was named after him as 
                                                Bharatavarsa or India

*   Patilputra    .                         The old name of Patna - a city of India in Bihar state

*   Magadh                                The Kingdom of Magadh was located in the current
                                                State of Bihar and other adjoining states of India.

* Bharat                                    Short old name of Bharatavarsa or India

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/10/2010 2:53:00 AM
Very sweet full of enjoyment, on this part. The passion is warming up to strong. All the other parts are so passionet, i feel the story getting deeper and more romantic in a seductive way for the readers. Enjoyed wiht pleasure to continue the story,..Poet D.
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Date: 3/22/2010 1:09:00 PM
hmmm, that last line leads me to think something sweet is coming. . . . I will save the next part for later. I am rushing off here now. thanks for your comment to my poem. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/21/2010 8:47:00 AM
Lyrical songs and music mixed with poetic lines of beauty so vivid and vibrant .. its like a magnet drawing others to enter into the story with u and the characters.. luv.. so enjoyed ..Linda-Marie..
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