Vasava - An Untold Story 14/Many

Vasava – 
An untold story                                                                        14/Many

				

Udiyan knew what his friend King Suyodhan, had briefed him about Vasava
That she would not compromise, on her determinations with anyone
Even if she is offered, the temptation of a kingdom,
It was enough an indication for Udiyan, that she would not succumb
To his rising passions and ever increasing charms and lust for her


Because of Vasava’s determinations, not to get involved
In physical relations, passions and body lusts, which may make her weak
And may become the main cause of her skill deterioration, 
Of her long cherished and preserved Music, Art, Dance or other devotions
She therefore decided to put a restriction, on all such alluring temptations

Her opinion that her self control, on the rising waves of passions and lust
Can only take her to those extra ordinary heights, where skills becomes perfections
As she has yet to attain the loftiest height of her skills
And her goal was far, far away from where she was standing
In spite of holding a rare prime position in the kingdom of Magadh**

She therefore had started loving her music and art
More than anything in the world, and got herself so much involved,
In attaining the perfection in her dance and singing arts,
That an inner beauty began to grow, glow and shine in her
With the shining of her dancing steps and her enchanting singing arts

The enthralling image of Vasava, was hovering on the mind of Udiyan
Removing every other image, for the time being from his mind and heart
Udiyan could not close his eyes, even for a moment
And passed his entire night sleeplessly in weaving his future with Vasava
As he was feeling that without her, life had no charms and meaning for him

Even the kingdom of Ujjain, appears to be of no attraction for him
Without Vasava being the queen, of his heart and his kingdom
Every thing seems to be a hallow or vacant like a void,
Even his own life, appeared to be not of his own,
Without, the sweet presence of his dream likes reality Vasava



Ravindra						to continue in 15

Kanpur India 20th April 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/22/2010 12:03:00 PM
well, this is great "conflict" now presented in the story. A virginal type who puts all energy into her art and a king who wants her. The stuff of a great story! Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/21/2010 5:32:00 AM
It's fine tale nicely told
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Date: 4/20/2010 11:47:00 PM
Allways drawn in, and always a pleasure, how are you my friend? love Simone
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Date: 4/20/2010 8:57:00 PM
Well told story,,Love the name...The Beauty of sorrow lies in a dream, wich made it reality in the untold story..p.d.
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Date: 4/20/2010 8:28:00 PM
Excellent and Magnificent and a true luv story ..I feel such a part of the poem and the scenery and the setting... u incorporate your reader with its magnetic beauty... amazing Ravindra..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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