Vasava - An Untold Story 13/Many

Vasava – An untold story					13/Many 


It appeared that the rhythms of her moving steps, were effecting
Even the sound of instruments, being played over there
And the viewers were rocking and were almost unconscious 
Under the magic of her enchanting dance, where 
She was trying to be one, with her heart and soul’s favorite Krishna**

Spectators were in a confusion, whether they should hear 
The sound of her Noopur’s** coming from her beautiful thrilling legs
Or they should watch the matchless beauty of her alluring face
The bewilderment kept on,  through out the night
Till Vasava’s performances remained on the stage

The eyes of spectators were trying, not to miss the charms of her beauty
And their ears were trying not to miss any sound, coming from her Nooper’s  
Which were tied up with her feet and were thrilling with her dancing steps
Everyone’s only wish and desire, in those rare moments was 
The show of her heavenly beauty, must go on and on and should never end


But like every thing which starts one day, in this mortal world
The show of Vasava also came to an end, in the early morning hours of next day
And suddenly the beautiful glamour of the night, started looking dull
When Vasava took leave from her spectators, with her half smiling face
After giving them the most beautiful gift of her company to all the guests
 
After closing of the annual function of Vijayadesmi**
Everyone left the auditorium of the Palace
Wishing and hoping that next year only, they would again be here
To see and witness the splendid beauty of Vasava and to hear the melodies
Which would keep pouring honey, in their ears again years after years

Emperor Udiyan also left the Palace, but with a heart,
Feeling the weight of a mountain on his chest
It became difficult and more difficult, for him to forgot her face
But more difficult it was for him to accept,
That Vasava can not be possessed, even by a mighty King like Udiyan 

Her thoughts and her feelings in his mind, were going higher and higher
Life the rising waves of a disturbed sea, they were splashing,
On the shores of his completely lost and disturbed mind
Causing Udiyan not to rest, for a while during the day and 
Even during the next night, in which Udiyan could not sleep for a while



Ravindra

Kanpur India   4th April 2010                                                         to continue in 14/ Many


** Two star means already explained earlier. Please see references in previous parts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/21/2010 7:33:00 PM
aha!! Now maybe things are gonna heat up with a man going after her?? Fascinating how she danced into the next day!! glad you commented to me today, so i could continue the saga here! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/19/2010 11:25:00 AM
beautifuul work
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Date: 4/15/2010 7:30:00 PM
More beautiful words from the collection of Vasava and one is better than the next each time u post them... brilliant descriptions of a most cultural country and great tribute to your Father... so enjoyed reading your very creative write...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/5/2010 4:37:00 AM
Great write in this story that you have so elogently unfurled...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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