Vantage Point

The queue curls;
Serpentine. 
Crimson faces
A woman exhales!
The last breath of her cigarette.
Takes her place:
at the tail end.
Thin silhouette, vital teeth missing!
We remain at the vantage point; watching.
Food bank: a new entry
In our dictionary.
A kindly man hands over green apples, a loaf of bread
And a tin of soup; indistinct!
To the mouth of the serpent:
An adolescent mother
With her babe in pushchair.
I usher my babes away;
Eyes moist!
 
 
Yasemin Balandi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 5:13 AM
A good write for you and touching for us ... but what is sillihuate? ... is it rap usage? ...
Balandi Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Sorry it was a typo. Corrected now.
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October 24, 2016 at 5:01 AM
dedicated to all those who are forced to live in poverty. food banks are a blooming where i live in the UK
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