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Vantage Point

The queue curls; Serpentine. Crimson faces A woman exhales! The last breath of her cigarette. Takes her place: at the tail end. Thin silhouette, vital teeth missing! We remain at the vantage point; watching. Food bank: a new entry In our dictionary. A kindly man hands over green apples, a loaf of bread And a tin of soup; indistinct! To the mouth of the serpent: An adolescent mother With her babe in pushchair. I usher my babes away; Eyes moist! Yasemin Balandi

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Date: 10/24/2016 5:13:00 AM
A good write for you and touching for us ... but what is sillihuate? ... is it rap usage? ...
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Yasemin Balandi
Date: 10/24/2016 8:46:00 AM
Sorry it was a typo. Corrected now.
Date: 10/24/2016 5:01:00 AM
dedicated to all those who are forced to live in poverty. food banks are a blooming where i live in the UK
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