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Come pray in this shady, serene location, A place of sheer bliss and candid delight, This scenic mead has a form and motion, Bear me dip in calm; God bore me insight. A place of sheer bliss and candid delight, While bowing below trees, nectar will overflow, Bear me dip in calm; God bore me insight, Hear the spells while gazing at the show. While bowing below trees, nectar will overflow, Nature's lure lugs me, its veins keen light, Hear the spells while gazing at the show, Noble kites rise as the lilts on the height. Nature's lure lugs me, its veins keen light, I am ogling at the sky, and love swells deep, Noble kites rise as the lilts on the height, Our joy fuels ardor as we cheer and leap. I am ogling at the sky, and love swells deep, This scenic mead has a form and motion, Our joy fuels ardor as we cheer and leap, Come pray in this shady, serene location.
Written: May 23, 2022

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Date: 5/29/2022 9:11:00 PM
Deep thought, meditation or prayer can transport us to a realm of blissful delight. Another comforting Pantoum, Lasaad. Thank you for your calming and comforting poems. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/24/2022 7:02:00 AM
Reading this poem, I got transported to an ethereal realm.....! Definitely you have created an ambiance of overflowing bliss ! What fantastic flow of an inner current lifting one to a sweet serenity ! Simply beautiful Lasaad....
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Date: 5/24/2022 5:12:00 AM
A place of sheer bliss--I feel the dynamic scenes through your words--and the joy you express, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/24/2022 2:15:00 AM
Heavenly Pantoum, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings!
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Date: 5/24/2022 1:51:00 AM
Imagery, alliteration and a perfect pantoum. Great.
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