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just put the word 'such' in place of 'so' right now..' I see this has a feature on soup home page for which I am grateful, I wonder did anyone pick out the 'deeds shout out line' that that follows the old adage that deeds
speak louder than words..'
before the first man made from clay, you caused the seas that toss today, also the
earth you made by hand, it bring forth fruit you did command! arrayed the heavens
sun and moon,.
With living stars the voids festoon.! or perhaps this fame is all undue? a
fallacy a lie untrue! and many people do such expound, that this is so! from
what they've found:)
For they can and will explain, that the elements state it all so plain, and that from
these alone all life came forth, yet in my ignorance I’ll say, in a vacuum case
these things could stay." and then times-plus they should be able to show
how life was formed the way they know.! and yet.! and yet.' I must confess.! And from
what I’ve seen I must digress.' for some women & men,we have been told, with, scientific
apparatus have so to say struck gold.! they planned and wrought, schemed and thought
And brought forth life I do believe." having thought about this quite a while.."
And though my instinct finds it vile; they’ve proved one point... To me past doubt.!
CREATION CREATION... Their deeds shout out..!
© Joe Maverick 23-10-2010
Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2010
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