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the clouds are drifting across the face of the moon a dark night in June tree shadows moving the glimmering comes and goes restless dreamers stir the dusky blossoms dance in the dark like lovers when night's pearl has waned

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Date: 2/24/2022 5:51:00 AM
This poem had a beautiful flow and superb imagery. I really enjoyed waking up to this today.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/24/2022 10:55:00 AM
How nice that is to know! Thank you. :)
Date: 10/23/2021 7:50:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, your enchanting pen stirs my heart and imagination in the most beautiful way. Moonlight is magical and you've captured that elusive quality perfectly. A lustrous strand of haiku! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/23/2021 10:08:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend, for the encouragement and joy your words bring. Have a wonderful weekend, Evelyn
Date: 10/16/2021 7:57:00 PM
'dance in the dark like lovers' -- poignantly captured, Evelyn! Here's to moonlight and stardust, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/16/2021 9:44:00 PM
They make night magic. Thank you, Gershon.
Date: 10/13/2021 10:24:00 PM
This is a beautiful set of haiku. Great imagery.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/14/2021 6:06:00 AM
Thank you very much. :)
Date: 10/13/2021 9:24:00 PM
Your well chosen words set the imagery in a very stunning way, Evelyn. Love this! :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/14/2021 6:06:00 AM
Thank you for the pleasure of your comment, Laura. :)
Date: 10/13/2021 8:49:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/13/2021 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, Karen.

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