Get Your Premium Membership

Vanishing Colours / Verblassende Farben

When colours vanish In early evening light I write a new poem Soon outside sounds diminish Towards a calm and cosy night ---------------------------------------- Wenn Farben verblassen Im früh fallenden Abendlicht Schreib ich ein neues Gedicht Bald werden draußen Laute leiser Für eine ruhig schöne Nacht

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/9/2010 10:31:00 AM
Just revisiting this one. Lovely as can be!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/8/2010 1:36:00 PM
Gert, poets agree, a special time indeed! thanks for your comments, jimbo
Login to Reply
Date: 5/8/2010 1:28:00 PM
Gert, In the quiet times our beings can feel that special power that fills us and lifts us up to receive those great messages that need to be shared...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 5/7/2010 11:28:00 AM
There is a serene quality to this poem that makes it a pleasure for the reader to take in, Gert. Focusing on writing helps erase the distractions of sounds. Well done! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 5/7/2010 8:46:00 AM
very nice thanks for your kind comments and enjoy your weekend faleshia
Login to Reply
Date: 5/6/2010 6:26:00 PM
Excellent, Gert and I can imagine that. I like the imagery in this well written Tanka. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 9:37:00 PM
Enjoyed the WRITE and READ. Thanks you for sharing both writes,,IRMA
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 8:43:00 PM
love the thing colours the things they can make one do. enjoying your reads and comment,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 6:48:00 PM
Enjoyed the Tanka as always
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 5:12:00 PM
Love it.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 4:15:00 PM
ps you gotta remember, gert, at this time I was in Spain, it was 1974. Franko was still in control and all was "safe" at least on the streets. haha. LUv, andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 4:14:00 PM
fanatastic as always! LUv, andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 5/5/2010 4:14:00 PM
Lovely words Gert and soothing to read.. I write my poems quickly and daily as inspiration moves the spirit.. appreciate all your sweet comments on my poetry.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry