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Facing global warming and climate change; many species will vanish from the Earth. Most don't seem concerned, and I find that strange; being tethered to this planet from birth. Whales might never swim our oceans again; reefs are dying and may never return. And we will lose vital links in life's chain when the glaciers melt and the forests burn. Tigers, jaguars, panthers, and leopards, all the endangered cats, will disappear. They'll die off, killed by ranchers and shepherds, and their numbers are decreasing each year. In seas where bottom trawlers aren't banished; like a magician, Nature has vanished.

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Date: 4/7/2024 2:46:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest with this exceptional poem, hugs
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Date: 4/8/2024 10:28:00 AM
Thanks, Constance; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Date: 4/2/2024 2:48:00 PM
Well, that bites!
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Date: 4/3/2024 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Tom; It sure does! I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/2/2024 1:11:00 PM
It's all so tragic, Emile. You represented the theme of our vanishing endangered species very well.
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Date: 4/3/2024 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2024 3:49:00 PM
Hello Emile, this is very sad. Everything you mention is happening now. there is a change. our crazy weather now. We had more spring weather then we had winter. I like this poem to. my fav. i hope your easter was a good one. My friend. enjoy your evening. /Darlene/
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Date: 4/2/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hello Emile, How was your Easter? How are you my friend? Mhy friend enjoy your dcay. /darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2024 12:41:00 PM
Dear emile, what a deep and meaningful poem this is, its amazing how you could rhyme and make your lines flow so well while writing about such an important topic, that is relevant today in this world, you have a very thoughtful way of expressing your concerns for climate change and global warming and youv touched on so many aspects of it such as reef dying etc which we see here too in maldives and try to control. But not many are concerned like youve said! I absolutely love this! BOL
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2024 3:18:00 PM
Thanks, Ink Empress; I always enjoy reading your in-depth critiques of my poems, my friend Emile.

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