Get Your Premium Membership

Vanilla Is

“Little boxes on the hillside; Little boxes made of ticky tacky Little boxes on the hillside; Little boxes all the same” from first verse of “Little Boxes” by Malvina Reynolds Vanilla Is . . . the typical white picket fence surrounding the front yard of a ticky tack house It’s a sunless sky waiting for a rainbow to embrace it It’s an ordinary bird’s egg before the burst of life emerges from it It’s a pie without the fruit; a cake with no frosting It’s the color of eyes grown dull longing for a glimpse of romance It’s my skin untouched by summer - still breathing winter’s snow It’s the quickly fading fragrance of inexpensive cologne as Tabu's more sensuous scent lingers on and on It’s a milky white-washed soul of unexceptional interest It’s a lackluster longing for nothing in particular As I see it, vanilla is the epitome of monotony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/18/2023 4:53:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your vanilla thoughts. Belated joyous birthday to you... God bless you.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2023 2:26:00 PM
glad to see this was a win - but not surprised at all. Hope you have a great time at the reunion x
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2023 10:04:00 AM
Dear Andrea, your imagery and metaphors are striking and cascade down the poetic page in graceful strides to the grand finale "As I see it, vanilla is/the epitome/of monotony". Stunning, is what "Vanilla Is"! Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2023 7:45:00 AM
My favorite lines Andrea: "It’s my skin untouched by summer - still breathing winter’s snow" but each "is" a delight to read. Congratulations! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2023 5:15:00 AM
A very well deserved win this is, beautiful and so creative. Congratulations
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2023 5:05:00 AM
andrea, look at you, thinking outside the 'ticky tacky box'! lol and it paid off..these sort of list type poems are very popular currently, and this one has some nice imagery - "my skin untouched by summer/still breathing winter's snow" - i like that a lot'; i also like "epitome of monotony" - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2023 11:00:00 PM
Thanks so much. I feel so inferior to free verse writers like yourself who come up with creative imagery, so to get a Win in one of your contests is a great honor for me.
Date: 9/11/2023 4:08:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! Enjoyed reading!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/11/2023 8:00:00 AM
“Its a sunless sky waiting for a rainbow to embrace it” that line is so beautiful, and so many brilliant lines in this poem. I love how seamlessly your poem flows. In such poetic elegance
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2023 3:43:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 9/11/2023 7:15:00 AM
This is very creative Ria, about vanilla in List form. Lots of imagery and metaphors. "sunless sky waiting for a rainbow to embrace it", beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs...~ Ani
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2023 3:32:00 PM
thanks, sweet friend. I wish I could have come up with more spectacular images than the few i did, but glad you like this.
Date: 9/11/2023 5:23:00 AM
t’s a milky white-washed soul of unexceptional interest It’s a lackluster longing for nothing in particular As I see it, vanilla is the epitome of monotony--brilliant metaphors, Andrea. Splendidly described.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2023 3:31:00 PM
thanks so much, Vijay.
Date: 9/11/2023 2:59:00 AM
Seems Vanilla is not high on your list of purchases. Still a fine poem with lots of imagery. Hugs.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2023 3:32:00 PM
No, never!
Date: 9/10/2023 7:22:00 PM
so delicious images, andrea, i loved the construction of the poem, the sweet variations fo colors and flavors until the punchline, a wonderful penning
Login to Reply
Date: 9/10/2023 1:52:00 PM
This is a beautiful, well written poem Andrea. Love the lines,It’s the colour of eyes grown dull longing for a glimpse of romance’, ‘ It’s my skin untouched by summer- still breathing winter’s snow’, Gloriously poetic! Great concluding lines. Really enjoyed it today. Thank you. :)
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2023 3:33:00 PM
thanks so much.
Date: 9/10/2023 12:23:00 PM
I love: as Tabu's more sensuous scent lingers on and on
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2023 3:33:00 PM
I really love Tabu. Chantilly too
Date: 9/10/2023 11:17:00 AM
Based on that list and those items my husband is, or sometimes can be vanilla. I suppose those you are describing simplicity.
Login to Reply
Dietrich Avatar
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/10/2023 12:38:00 PM
you got one of those too, huh?

Book: Shattered Sighs