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Vanilla Grace

A spirited moon skipped and skid across the silent snowy steppes as a pale sun sidled and slid. Her passionate sensuous steps softly seduced the stars to shine across the silent snowy steppes. I beseeched the night to be mine, singing a sentimental song, softly seduced the stars to shine. The Milky Way formed a sarong surrounding me with deep desire, singing a sentimental song. I followed lustily in dire need of fragrant vanilla grace, surrounding me with deep desire. The mystical night chided me, a spirited moon skipped and skid. Her radiance had blinded me as a pale sun sidled and slid.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/16/2023 10:12:00 AM
Dear Linda, your golden pen shines in the beauty and artistry of your poem graced with sprinklings of arresting alliteration and ethereal imagery like "a pale sun sidled and slid" and "The Milky Way formed a sarong". A superb poem that "softly seduced" my heart's imagination. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/16/2023 1:41:00 PM
Hello dear Susan. I am so warmed by your visit and the many fine words of praise for this poem. Many thanks for your thoughtfulness! :)
Date: 9/16/2023 5:16:00 AM
Those opening lines are brilliant. Such a creative descriptve write this is dear talented poet. I love this. Definitely a fave. Congratulations
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/16/2023 7:49:00 AM
You are a kind spirit Inky. Thank you for your warm encouraging comments and for the fav!! hugs :)
Date: 9/16/2023 5:12:00 AM
i'm not usually a fan of repetitive forms, but this terzanelle captivated me; i think it's lovely, especially "a pale sun sidled and slid" - i like that a lot..difficult to get imagery into these repetitive forms, but you managed it - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/16/2023 7:47:00 AM
I am doubly honored Charlotte! Thank you for my placement and for your stimulating contests. :)
Date: 9/10/2023 6:04:00 PM
An amazing poem Linda. Definitely a contender.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2023 6:19:00 PM
You are kind with your comments Jerry. Thank you! :)
Date: 9/10/2023 5:06:00 PM
Superbly written, Linda! I loved it - Regards, John
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2023 6:18:00 PM
Oh so many thanks John. I appreciate your visit and supportive comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 9/10/2023 4:13:00 PM
The imagery is sensational, in terzanelle form and is engaging and seductive as vanilla grace has captured your undivided attention...or was it mine? Lol gorgeous entry, Linda. Cinematic!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/16/2023 12:37:00 PM
Back with congratulations, bff!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2023 5:21:00 PM
Hi bff! Thank you. I've written only one other terzanelle, for a contest, and it was NA. LOL. I hope that's not the trend! Love seeing you! :)

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