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September 9, 2023

Contest : Vanilla

Sponsored by : Charlotte Puddifoot

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Walking together entwined in the moonshine, you whispered the tune of the autumn breeze. Your enigmatic smile, the mirage of illusion, sparkled in my stellar sky of yearning. When the freezing wind of discontent blew, your insipid lips curled like wilted flower petals. The diaphanous mist of makeover shrouded you, blenched you of all colors, and diluted your aroma. At the mellow sunset under pallid twilight sky, I walked alone in your ashen garden path in the meadow of unblossomed buds, emiting ordinary smell unexciting. My fuzzy sense of frozen fervor lingered in the crevice of your remote heart so pale. With the thousand candles of burning desire I tried then to brighten up your vanilla charisma.

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Date: 9/16/2023 9:49:00 AM
Dear Subimal, the beauty and artistry of your golden pen shines in this mesmerizing verse. Exceptional and intimate, poignant emotions glow softly from the poetic page to light the depths of my heart. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/17/2023 10:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your visit and for the encouraging comments that i value very much.
Date: 9/16/2023 7:38:00 AM
Subimal, your distinctive style shines through with this poem. Just lovely! Congratulations! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/17/2023 10:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda for your encouraging comment.
Date: 9/16/2023 4:51:00 AM
a lovely, graceful write from you; nice images, all leading up to that last line..i enjoyed reading this one - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 9/10/2023 6:46:00 PM
You have a way with words! When the freezing wind of discontent blew, your insipid lips curled like wilted flower petals.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/10/2023 10:56:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and nice comment, Km.

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