Cecil Hickman Poet Couplet

Vampire Desire (Footle)

One bite
So right

My soul
Control

I feed
Indeed

Vampire
Souls fire

I bite
Tonight

Soul gone
No con

We need
One seed

For now
I vow

To bleed
In deed

Sorrow
Furlough

Tonight
My sight

Brings peace
Release

One goal
Free soul

Forth night
Day light

We die
No lie

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October 26, 2009 at 4:56 PM Cecil, I wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson October 26, 2009 at 4:12 PM Great poem. congratulations. Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire October 26, 2009 at 6:46 AM Congratulations, Cecil! This is an awesome write! Miss hearing from you. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards October 26, 2009 at 6:36 AM Great job, Cecil! Congratulations on your winning footles!!~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown October 26, 2009 at 3:37 AM Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Cecil. Love, Carol

Corinne Curcio October 26, 2009 at 3:35 AM Congratulations on your footle win

Robin L. Gass October 26, 2009 at 3:22 AM Congratulation on your Win in Donnas' contest, Cecil! This is a wonderfully "frightful" Footle! Love, Robin

Donna Golden October 25, 2009 at 10:28 PM Chilling, creepy footle, Cecil! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest. Hugs, Donna

Ashe Kristy De La Keur Scoville October 20, 2009 at 10:25 PM Definitely intersting and unique...Thanks so much for leaving me the comments....The Southern Belle

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 19, 2009 at 7:48 AM A wondeful spin on vampires :) good luck in tghe contest and thanks for your comments as well :)

Kate W October 18, 2009 at 12:50 PM best of luck in the contest............kate

October 14, 2009 at 8:22 AM Wow! This looks like it was a challenge to write. Clever title. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Carrie Richards October 12, 2009 at 8:03 AM Wow.....you went above and beyond with this fun footle!!! Great job, Cecil !! ~ love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown October 12, 2009 at 6:29 AM Wishing you the best in the contest Cecil. You left the rest of us without anything to say. Teasing. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly October 12, 2009 at 3:54 AM You Sang ..... In Fang ..... The Stake .... Heartbreak !!! .... Great piece , Cecil .

Kabuteng P.Ink K. October 11, 2009 at 9:47 PM I really enjoyed this footle :) your first line alone reeled me in--good luck in the contest! :)