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Vampire

In darkness prey, hunts a vampire Empty within the soul Sucking life's feelings, drained beautiful thoughts Savouring frozen emotions, falling on top Biting deep into flesh Draining hurt tastes To savour each drop Lusting eyes, without soul pleasure hurts Love tastes beautiful Sipping slowly, without emotion Until the last drop Smiling taste ache Broken heart Died love On the last drop, cold without life In you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/3/2013 4:03:00 PM
I love this dark poem, Liam! I have to admit that somewhere deep in my heart, I have a soft spot for the gothic poems such as this. Amazing job on this one!....I have a new poem that you might want to check out, it also has a vampire theme. It is titled, "My Despair".
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 5:10:00 AM
OH I BETTER CHECK IT OUT OH BUT I HAVE ONE THAT WILL TAKE OUT THANK YOU

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