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Vampire

Vampire, out for no good.
Vile-a stake made of wood,
Victory over you.
Violent, that’s you too.
Villainous to nice folk.
Very bad, nasty bloke.
Vexing, should end in smoke.

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Sam Kauffman

October 6, 2023 at 2:35 PM

SV, back with congratulations for your win! Truly, this is a terrifying picture of a blood sucking, cursed person. You used the "v" words so effectively! Sending you blessings and a silver bullet!

Speaks Volumes

October 21, 2023 at 4:07 PM

Thanks so much Sam. I love your comments. Brighten my days. Sorry for the late response to this. My Granddaughter will be heading home to California soon, and I will catch up on all my reading on Soup. Sorry for the late response.

Joseph May

September 27, 2023 at 8:34 AM

Congrats on your win, Nicely penned

Speaks Volumes

September 27, 2023 at 9:46 AM

Thank you

Terry Miller

September 27, 2023 at 7:40 AM

Great Vampire Pleiades; congratulations

Speaks Volumes

September 27, 2023 at 8:05 AM

Thanks Terry :)

Bill Baker

September 22, 2023 at 1:52 PM

Good vampire Pleaides, SV. I never did send you another three. I will though. Have a great week! Bill

Speaks Volumes

September 22, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Glad you like it Bill. They are a bit of fun. I'd love you to send me 3 more, but no hurry at the moment, My 28 yr old granddaughter and the chap she will marry are arriving soon from USA to visit us in Australia. They will be here for weeks, so I wont be on Soup much. Maybe a quick peek at night is all. I will look forward to read some of your lovely poetry to cheer me up after they go back home.. :(

Yann Rolland

September 21, 2023 at 10:53 PM

i love vampires, my girlfriend too, this is a sharp and interesting portrait, better read at midnight, en.joyed yann

Speaks Volumes

September 22, 2023 at 12:12 AM

Glad you liked it Yann Thank You for commenting. Best Wishes from SV

I Am Anaya

September 21, 2023 at 1:43 PM

Memnock the devil Letstat, remember Ann Rice vampire series? damn she scared me. Even had a book about Michael the arc Angel. ***Your narrator so blunt, love that " Very bad nasty bloke" great entry SV. soupmail

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 8:56 PM

Did Laf want no commenting ?? I cant live without commenting on her poems !! What if she writes another slippery snake poem, and I cant comment ?? I had better read the blog.. I dont usually, they ge me into trouble. All these wimmin yellin at me fer sumfin I did or didnt do.

I Am Anaya

September 21, 2023 at 6:09 PM

Lol, I'm learning Aussie lingo, dingo...through all you Aussie blokes! Love it....I'm not sending it, don't want to bum you out 'bout stupid stuff (blogs) be happy, and if poets want no commenting on their space, we should respect it! :D you can count on 'laf' and mua oh and Robby G. Did you know Kenny G. has the same last name as Robert! Fun fact missy.

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 3:03 PM

Bad nasty bloke is Aussie for "not a nice guy" I didn't get any soupmail. Are you still writing it ?Only reason I get soupmail is so someone can tell me what I did wrong. What goof up did I perform this time ? BTW Thanks for your comment Anaya. Always welcomed. :)

Jay Narain

September 21, 2023 at 12:00 PM

Quite terrifying Pleiades, best for a win.

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 1:36 PM

Thanks Jay

Sotto Poet

September 21, 2023 at 11:54 AM

This imaginative interpretation of vampires for the Pleiades contest is truly remarkable. It evokes a haunting and eerie atmosphere, skillfully capturing the essence of spookiness. BOL in the contest

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 1:36 PM

Thanks SP

Sam Kauffman

September 21, 2023 at 11:30 AM

SV, you have captured the evil that flows through every part of a vampire! Indeed, "out for no good!" And, through all of the sinister traits of a vampire, you subtly voice "victory over you!" Evil will not win. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Well done!

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 1:36 PM

Thanks Sam

Ink Empress

September 21, 2023 at 9:24 AM

I love vampire movies and poems, you used such brilliant words for this. And ofcourse you would rhyme! How ive missed reading your rhymes. Love especially “ villainous to nice folk “ and “ vexing should end in smoke . Ahhh have you read twilight series? I thought the book was better than movies: dragons and vampires i love reading abt. Goodluck for the contest. Sending you light today and always

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 1:38 PM

Thanks Empress

Victor Buhagiar

September 21, 2023 at 4:33 AM

Quite terrifying Pleiades, best for a win.

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 6:02 AM

Thanks for your favorable comment Victor. Hoping you are well.

Hiya Sharma

September 21, 2023 at 1:54 AM

Oh, such a creative take on Vampire for the Pleiades contest.. Quite haunting and eerie this is, perfectly creating the spooky ambience.. Best of luck!

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 6:02 AM

Thank you sweet Hiya. A bit of fun

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 21, 2023 at 12:54 AM

- ... "Very bad, nasty bloke" ... I hope I never meet him :) - Great written, S,V, :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs

I Am Anaya

September 21, 2023 at 6:22 PM

I agree, Sunshine Smile inspired a few of my poems with her in mind!

Speaks Volumes

September 21, 2023 at 1:32 AM

Lol Thanks sweet friend. Not the most poetic of rhymes, but we have our Granddaughter and future husband coming next week, and I have run out of time to do all that has to be done. One more poem and I will be off for a few weeks. Your comments always gladden my heart. Such a fine poet, I don't know where you get the time to write your own beautiful poems and praise others too. I really do appreciate it. (Secret, when I think of you, you will always be Sunshine to me) It suits you so well cause thats what you bring.

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