Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Vampire -

~ the traceless figures - leave the deepest traces ~
                                                 quote by poet

                                                A spark was lit
                                             of foreign energies
                                         the flame of wickedness
                                           - a vampire epidemic
                                               The evil demons
                                        somewhat pale, admittedly
                                            Bloody Mary - cheers
                                Cold and cruel they satisfy their thirst
                                   A beast of the night and darkness
                                    which are vulnerable to sunlight
                                   I swear the flame's fidelity is torn
                                    of these night stalking creatures
                                                
                                              they party all night
                                     bloody foul-smelling corpse shirt -
                                             red carpet dress code



                                                  19.04.2023
                                           Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                           - 'V' Words Contest -
                                   Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                          1st place in the contest

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Constance La France April 24, 2023 at 5:15 AM Sunshine, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, you write a good vampire poem, I like your quote and image too, congratulations. ! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 6:51 AM - Many thanks, Constance ... a great challenge ... I like to participate :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds April 23, 2023 at 6:14 PM A vampire epidemic is a scary thought Ann-Lise. An impressive write, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Hugs Belle :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:37 AM - Belle, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 23, 2023 at 10:12 AM A fantastic vampire poem, with stunning images. 'The evil demons somewhat pale, admittedly Bloody Mary-cheers,' is a fine example. Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise. :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:36 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes April 23, 2023 at 8:28 AM I missed this one when you posted it. Wow best description I have read of the gruesome figures. Congrats on a wonderfully well earned Win Ann-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:36 AM - Wendy, many thanks for the comment and congratulations :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 23, 2023 at 7:56 AM oh what a cool last line that is with the dress code thing. very creative, and Congrats in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:35 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 23, 2023 at 4:10 AM Congratulations on your top win in the Contest...Sunshine. I like your poem... Well written. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:34 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Aldonso :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh April 23, 2023 at 4:01 AM Congrats sweet friend. God bless you. Love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:34 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Gina :) - hugs

Clifford Villalon April 23, 2023 at 1:28 AM Is the party held in Castle Combe?... Congratulations Miss Sunshine! =) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:34 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Cliff :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex April 23, 2023 at 12:36 AM "flame of wickedness" - Connecting the vampire with epidemic... Very beautifully written. Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:33 AM - Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Alex :) - hugs

Valsa George April 22, 2023 at 10:50 PM Vampires dance.....! Congratulations Smile on your first place win. Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:33 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Joseph May April 22, 2023 at 2:42 PM Dropping back with Congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:32 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 22, 2023 at 1:51 PM Congratulations on your win. What a story/write/quote/picture. Have a blessed weekend....... Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:32 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler April 22, 2023 at 11:38 AM An eerie write Anne-Lise. I love it! Congratulations on your win! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:31 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Alexis Y. April 22, 2023 at 10:31 AM Hi Anne-Lise, I'm just coming back to say congrats on your fine win. Have a nice day;-) Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:31 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 22, 2023 at 7:43 AM Congratulations on your top win, Dear Sunshine! This is really spooky and dark! Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:31 AM - Many thanks for the congratulations, Mala :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar April 21, 2023 at 9:57 PM Your vampire poem is right on the mark. It should do well. As for my poem Stealing a rainbow, we all know it's impossible, so love is unattainable. Anne-Lise Andresen April 23, 2023 at 4:08 AM - Yes, we all know it's impossible to steal the rainbow my friend :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Alexis Y. April 21, 2023 at 9:41 PM Hi Anne-Lise, You’ve penned a good entry on Vampires for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Well done. Have a good evening and weekend-Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:30 AM - Alexis, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Eve Roper April 21, 2023 at 7:27 PM Well written, Sunshine. good luck my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:30 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Eve :) - hugs

Shirley Hawkins April 21, 2023 at 3:19 PM Very spooky and macabre. Good luck with the contest, Sunshine. I think you have a winner. Take care, Shirley Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2023 at 1:29 AM - Many thanks for your comment, Shirley :) - hugs

Valsa George April 21, 2023 at 4:07 AM Love the quote and the poem. Spooky creatures fleeing with sunlight, but performing macabre dances at night. All the Best dear Smile. Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2023 at 12:10 PM - Valsa, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick April 20, 2023 at 8:01 AM This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2023 at 12:48 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit April 20, 2023 at 6:04 AM Those evil ones--well depicted, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2023 at 12:47 PM - Yes, those evil ones Vijay :) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel April 19, 2023 at 11:27 PM Dark, but well written, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2023 at 2:26 AM - Vampire theme is dark as in the grave, Jo - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Joseph May April 19, 2023 at 4:56 PM They find love at first bite, Very nicely penned Anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2023 at 2:25 AM ... :))) ... yes, at first bite ... but, the love is not long-lasting, Joseph :))) - Thank you for your comment :) - hugs

Stephan McBride April 19, 2023 at 3:59 PM Must be nice being in Norway to cold for vampires there : ). Great poem , hugs : ) Anne-Lise Andresen April 20, 2023 at 2:22 AM - It is often cold in Norway ... but not all year round ... many thanks for your comment, Stephan :) - hugs

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