Valuable Values

Valuable values

A child receives a beautiful toy,
it came in a cardboard box
with shiny wrapping paper.
A short time later
the child was seen
playing with the box
and the toy was abandoned in the corner.

Was it because the child was ungrateful?
Did the child not appreciate the value
of the gift?
Did the child not understand 
what the gift was?
Did the child not comprehend 
that the box
although it was beautiful, 
it was empty, and had no value?

It's hard to comprehend all the why's,

but sometimes even we as adults
do the same things. 

We value empty things 
with shiny wrappers, 
more than things of real value.

For example:

What's worth more, has more value,
your values, or money?
Would you compromise morals
your values, for riches and success?

Many do, thinking they will be happier
with more things.

Take Hollywood as an example:

Many have achieved fame and fortune
yet have not attained true happiness.

They chased the shiny boxes of success
because of the shiny wrapping paper
but in the end they are left feeling
empty.
Don't believe me?
why then do the rich and famous 
also commit suicide?

Let's not make the same mistakes...

we can learn that our values 
are what's valuable,
and when they are compromised, 
or sacrificed,
we lose, 
more than what we may gain.

When we lose our values 
we lose ourselves....
because we are the gift...
we have the gift of life...
we prove by how we use it,
or abuse it,
whether we are grateful,
or not,
for the gift, 
to the giver,
or whether we prefer
shiny empty boxes.

October 11, 2016
John Derek Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 12:51 AM
A poem that makes one think because it is so true:) well written, John:)
Hamilton Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Jo
Lamoureux Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Much to ponder here John. Well xpressed my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Thanks Richard, nice to hear from you! Have a great day!
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 6:35 PM
I'm making this a fave John - such wise observations on life -having riches and material things does not necessarily bring happiness... quite the opposite .the line about the suicides is very true. Nov 2013 my hubby had cancer surgery, at xmas we both had one 'token' gift to open as I had all I wanted my hubby to be clear of cancer - every year since then we spend £10 on a small gift - no price can be put on health... if you have that you are the wealthiest person in the world:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Thanks sooo much Jan!!!
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