thriveni c mysore Poet Free verse

Valley of beautiful flowers

“In all my mountain wanderings I had not seen a more beautiful flower than this Primula, the fine raindrops clung to its soft petals like galaxies of seed-pearls and frosted its leaves with silver."
- Quote by British mountaineer Frank S Smythe, on his discovery of ‘Valley of flowers’. 
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Cradled between mountains
Valley sleeps in beauty
Swaying to chosen winds
Smiling to the blessed eyes
Beaming divine silence
Only clouds caress them
Riot of changing hues
Blooming just, right on cue

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Heidi Sands April 2, 2025 at 3:32 PM Congratulations for your beautiful win :) thriveni c mysore April 2, 2025 at 6:36 PM Thank you for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet. I am glad you liked it, thank you.

Paula Goldsmith April 2, 2025 at 10:54 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write and quote. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............ thriveni c mysore April 2, 2025 at 6:35 PM Thank you for your visiting this valley of flowers dear friend, your kind words and blessings brings joy to me, thank you dear poet.

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 31, 2025 at 3:59 PM Your poem took me away to that beautiful valley, Thriveni. Lovely poem! Congratulations on your win. thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 9:25 PM Ah! that is so sweet. thank you for your kind visit and words dear friend. thank you very much.

Marilene Evans March 31, 2025 at 12:03 PM Congratulations! Your imagery is outstanding ... valley sleeps in beaty, riot of changing hues ... thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 9:25 PM I am glad you liked dear friend, thank you for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you.

Sam Kauffman March 31, 2025 at 11:18 AM Back with congratulations, my friend! I am so glad you chose to write on the discovery of this valley! So beautiful! Sending you blessings for each day scented with the joy flowers! thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 9:24 PM Thank you kind poet for your visit and precious time and sweet words. I am grateful to you for your blessings, thank you.

Karen Jones March 31, 2025 at 8:00 AM Love the quote and your poem is beautiful as well! Belated congratulations! thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 9:22 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. Thank you for sweet words. hugs & cheers

Terry Miller March 31, 2025 at 2:51 AM Eight great lines, congratulations thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 3:57 AM Oh me! you are generous dear poet, thank you so much for your kind visit and words, puffing pink! thank you.

Margaret Foster March 31, 2025 at 1:55 AM Lovely visuals here. Reminiscent of the wildflowers here in W A when the desert blooms for a short time in spring. Well done Thriveni. :) thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 3:55 AM I am glad you came by to read my write dear poet, thank you for your kind words. It should be nice - desert blooms. Thank you dear friend.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa March 30, 2025 at 11:34 PM Congratulations on your winning placement. thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:09 AM Thank you dear poet for your kind visit with this cheerful words. Thank you.

Krishnanand Guptar March 30, 2025 at 11:01 PM Congratulations, dear friend , on your top placement in this poetry contest with a picturesque poem chanting nature`s beauty. thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:08 AM Your kind visit and happy words means so much to me. Thank you dear poet.

Victor Buhagiar March 30, 2025 at 9:43 PM Congrats on your win. Victor thriveni c mysore March 31, 2025 at 12:08 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet. Thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler March 30, 2025 at 6:21 PM Terrific write Thriveni. Our wildflowers have just begun and already they are a "Riot of changing hues..." Congratulations! :) thriveni c mysore March 30, 2025 at 9:23 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. I am glad you are amidst the 'riot of hues' Thank you so much for the pleasant words, cheers!

Sotto Poet March 30, 2025 at 1:34 PM Congratulations on your great contest win with this outstanding and romantic verse, Thriveni. Warm hugs thriveni c mysore March 30, 2025 at 9:22 PM I am so glad by your kind visit and sweet words dear poet, I pocket them as blessings, Thank you very much. thank you..

David Crandall March 27, 2025 at 2:44 PM Just as your poetry suggests, I see that the Valley of the Flowers is very beautiful, is is too, the primula. thriveni c mysore March 27, 2025 at 9:28 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. I am glad you looked up for the flowers and valley. Thank you very much for your precious time dear poet.

Sam Kauffman March 27, 2025 at 10:08 AM Hi Thriveni, I love this poem! It is gentle. Each line tells the story of this amazing valley filled with flowers. I can see the beauty of each primrose and experience the perfume through your words! What a sight that must have been when discovered! If this is for a contest, best wishes, my friend! Sending blessings of spring flowers! thriveni c mysore March 27, 2025 at 9:27 PM Smythe, who discovered and named it as valley of flowers has written a book by the same name where he explains his expedition, dear poet, you will love it. (available free in Internet archive) Thank you for your kind visit and generous words, priceless for me. I am grateful to you for the blessings dear friend. Thank you.