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Valley of beautiful flowers

“In all my mountain wanderings I had not seen a more beautiful flower than this Primula, the fine raindrops clung to its soft petals like galaxies of seed-pearls and frosted its leaves with silver."
- Quote by British mountaineer Frank S Smythe, on his discovery of ‘Valley of flowers’. 
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Cradled between mountains
Valley sleeps in beauty
Swaying to chosen winds
Smiling to the blessed eyes
Beaming divine silence
Only clouds caress them
Riot of changing hues
Blooming just, right on cue

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Heidi Sands Date: 4/2/2025 3:32:00 PM Congratulations for your beautiful win :) Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 4/2/2025 6:36:00 PM Thank you for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet. I am glad you liked it, thank you.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/2/2025 10:54:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write and quote. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away............ Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 4/2/2025 6:35:00 PM Thank you for your visiting this valley of flowers dear friend, your kind words and blessings brings joy to me, thank you dear poet.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 3/31/2025 3:59:00 PM Your poem took me away to that beautiful valley, Thriveni. Lovely poem! Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 9:25:00 PM Ah! that is so sweet. thank you for your kind visit and words dear friend. thank you very much.

Marilene Evans Date: 3/31/2025 12:03:00 PM Congratulations! Your imagery is outstanding ... valley sleeps in beaty, riot of changing hues ... Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 9:25:00 PM I am glad you liked dear friend, thank you for your kind visit and sweet words. Thank you.

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/31/2025 11:18:00 AM Back with congratulations, my friend! I am so glad you chose to write on the discovery of this valley! So beautiful! Sending you blessings for each day scented with the joy flowers! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 9:24:00 PM Thank you kind poet for your visit and precious time and sweet words. I am grateful to you for your blessings, thank you.

Karen Jones Date: 3/31/2025 8:00:00 AM Love the quote and your poem is beautiful as well! Belated congratulations! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 9:22:00 PM Thank you so much for your kind visit dear friend. Thank you for sweet words. hugs & cheers

Terry Miller Date: 3/31/2025 2:51:00 AM Eight great lines, congratulations Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 3:57:00 AM Oh me! you are generous dear poet, thank you so much for your kind visit and words, puffing pink! thank you.

Margaret Foster Date: 3/31/2025 1:55:00 AM Lovely visuals here. Reminiscent of the wildflowers here in W A when the desert blooms for a short time in spring. Well done Thriveni. :) Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 3:55:00 AM I am glad you came by to read my write dear poet, thank you for your kind words. It should be nice - desert blooms. Thank you dear friend.

Maclawrence Famuyiwa Date: 3/30/2025 11:34:00 PM Congratulations on your winning placement. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:09:00 AM Thank you dear poet for your kind visit with this cheerful words. Thank you.

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 3/30/2025 11:01:00 PM Congratulations, dear friend , on your top placement in this poetry contest with a picturesque poem chanting nature`s beauty. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:08:00 AM Your kind visit and happy words means so much to me. Thank you dear poet.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/30/2025 9:43:00 PM Congrats on your win. Victor Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/31/2025 12:08:00 AM Thank you so much for your kind visit and sweet words dear poet. Thank you.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/30/2025 6:21:00 PM Terrific write Thriveni. Our wildflowers have just begun and already they are a "Riot of changing hues..." Congratulations! :) Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/30/2025 9:23:00 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. I am glad you are amidst the 'riot of hues' Thank you so much for the pleasant words, cheers!

Sotto Poet Date: 3/30/2025 1:34:00 PM Congratulations on your great contest win with this outstanding and romantic verse, Thriveni. Warm hugs Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/30/2025 9:22:00 PM I am so glad by your kind visit and sweet words dear poet, I pocket them as blessings, Thank you very much. thank you..

David Crandall Date: 3/27/2025 2:44:00 PM Just as your poetry suggests, I see that the Valley of the Flowers is very beautiful, is is too, the primula. Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/27/2025 9:28:00 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear friend. I am glad you looked up for the flowers and valley. Thank you very much for your precious time dear poet.

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/27/2025 10:08:00 AM Hi Thriveni, I love this poem! It is gentle. Each line tells the story of this amazing valley filled with flowers. I can see the beauty of each primrose and experience the perfume through your words! What a sight that must have been when discovered! If this is for a contest, best wishes, my friend! Sending blessings of spring flowers! Login to Reply thriveni c mysore Date: 3/27/2025 9:27:00 PM Smythe, who discovered and named it as valley of flowers has written a book by the same name where he explains his expedition, dear poet, you will love it. (available free in Internet archive) Thank you for your kind visit and generous words, priceless for me. I am grateful to you for the blessings dear friend. Thank you.