Valley Between Embroidered Waves

In the valley there is a boat
I gloat at this discovery
And look for the crests
That shook my spinal column

It is the curls of dreams there
Pearls of turquoise delight
For which aspires everyone
While swimming in English channel

Thanks to the bliss in the current
In pink yellow and orange
Van Gogh blooms in the valley
Natural flowers get envious

Embroidered waves rise and fall
Story of valley never ends
Heartbeats on the mountain tops
Skip a beat of yours and mine


September 24, 2017.
Contest : Form V - Verse Me a Poem.
Sponsor : Broken Wings.
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Inman Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Nice write Probir, enjoyed reading it.
Gupta Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Thank you so much, James ...
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October 4, 2017 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem. I liked so much the expression .. Van Gogh blooms in the valley!
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October 4, 2017 at 11:35 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem. I liked so much the expression .. Van Gogh blooms in the valley!
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Thank you so much ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 9:26 PM
Great write Probir a delightful read. Congratulations.
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Thank you, Janis for liking the poem ...
Sands Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations Probir :)
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
La France Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem !
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Thank you, BW for the opportunity to contribute to your nice contest and the enjoyable placement ...
Roper Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Love the painting you have painted, Probir. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gupta Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
One Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 10:46 AM
Lovely poem my friend..
Gupta Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 11:27 AM
Glad you like it, Silent ... Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 1:58 AM
- You have painted a beautiful picture, Probir ... like Vincent van Gogh - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise ...
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Very nice Probir. I love the ending! Good luck in the contest :)
Gupta Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 1:36 PM
A very pleasing poem to read--words so lyrical and well crafted--best wishes for a win Probir!
Gupta Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:36 PM
Thanx Vijay ...
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