Valley Between Embroidered Waves

In the valley there is a boat
I gloat at this discovery
And look for the crests
That shook my spinal column

It is the curls of dreams there
Pearls of turquoise delight
For which aspires everyone
While swimming in English channel

Thanks to the bliss in the current
In pink yellow and orange
Van Gogh blooms in the valley
Natural flowers get envious

Embroidered waves rise and fall
Story of valley never ends
Heartbeats on the mountain tops
Skip a beat of yours and mine


September 24, 2017.
Contest : Form V - Verse Me a Poem.
Sponsor : Broken Wings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/6/2017 6:53:00 AM
Nice write Probir, enjoyed reading it.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/6/2017 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, James ...
Date: 10/4/2017 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem. I liked so much the expression .. Van Gogh blooms in the valley!
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem. I liked so much the expression .. Van Gogh blooms in the valley!
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 10/4/2017 9:26:00 PM
Great write Probir a delightful read. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Janis for liking the poem ...
Date: 10/4/2017 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations Probir :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 10/4/2017 6:22:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem !
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, BW for the opportunity to contribute to your nice contest and the enjoyable placement ...
Date: 9/25/2017 10:32:00 PM
Love the painting you have painted, Probir. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/26/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 9/25/2017 10:46:00 AM
Lovely poem my friend..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/25/2017 11:27:00 AM
Glad you like it, Silent ... Thank you ...
Date: 9/25/2017 1:58:00 AM
- You have painted a beautiful picture, Probir ... like Vincent van Gogh - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/25/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise ...
Date: 9/24/2017 4:35:00 PM
Very nice Probir. I love the ending! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/24/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 9/24/2017 1:36:00 PM
A very pleasing poem to read--words so lyrical and well crafted--best wishes for a win Probir!
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Date: 9/24/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thanx Vijay ...
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