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Valley Between Embroidered Waves

In the valley there is a boat I gloat at this discovery And look for the crests That shook my spinal column It is the curls of dreams there Pearls of turquoise delight For which aspires everyone While swimming in English channel Thanks to the bliss in the current In pink yellow and orange Van Gogh blooms in the valley Natural flowers get envious Embroidered waves rise and fall Story of valley never ends Heartbeats on the mountain tops Skip a beat of yours and mine September 24, 2017. Contest : Form V - Verse Me a Poem. Sponsor : Broken Wings.

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Date: 10/6/2017 6:53:00 AM
Nice write Probir, enjoyed reading it.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/6/2017 6:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, James ...
Date: 10/4/2017 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem. I liked so much the expression .. Van Gogh blooms in the valley!
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Date: 10/4/2017 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem. I liked so much the expression .. Van Gogh blooms in the valley!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/5/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 10/4/2017 9:26:00 PM
Great write Probir a delightful read. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Janis for liking the poem ...
Date: 10/4/2017 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations Probir :)
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 10/4/2017 6:22:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem !
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Date: 10/5/2017 9:34:00 AM
Thank you, BW for the opportunity to contribute to your nice contest and the enjoyable placement ...
Date: 9/25/2017 10:32:00 PM
Love the painting you have painted, Probir. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/26/2017 12:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 9/25/2017 10:46:00 AM
Lovely poem my friend..
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Date: 9/25/2017 11:27:00 AM
Glad you like it, Silent ... Thank you ...
Date: 9/25/2017 1:58:00 AM
- You have painted a beautiful picture, Probir ... like Vincent van Gogh - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/25/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise ...
Date: 9/24/2017 4:35:00 PM
Very nice Probir. I love the ending! Good luck in the contest :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/24/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 9/24/2017 1:36:00 PM
A very pleasing poem to read--words so lyrical and well crafted--best wishes for a win Probir!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/24/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thanx Vijay ...

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