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For my dear friend whom loves anything Norse, enjoy dear lady. cheri

Valhalla-The Vikings-Part 1

In the bay of icy mists, the viking ghost ships arrive, sails set full ahead,
Crashing anchors rattle loose, plunging beneath the cold murky surf,
As the hailing horns of the dead, announce to their lord, Odin, that
Valor's courageous have arrived, and wish to enter, the great halls of
Valhalla.
Here the cold winds of the north dwell, it's chilling
Breezes flow freely, through the phantom warriors spirits.
But these rough men fear not death, nor it's harsh breath, for they
Are vikings of the northern kingdoms, and they have come for
Their last rewards treasure, to enter beyond the gates of Valhalla,
And are armed ready to fight, beside their God Odin,
In victorious battle.
In these waters of the ethereal unknown passage,
The cracking and heaving, of these heavily
Laden vessels made of vapors thin mists,
Send an eerie chill down the backs, of mortal men.
As mountain icebergs float upon the wind
Chilled oceans surface, the Valkyries approach,
Smiling beneath their shimmering chain-mail of
Brilliance honor.
On the evergreen shores, a timbered lined hall stands,
It's gates of golden pitch blaze, with fires white
Hot flames of those concurred, their souls scream
For penance mercy.
Two long swords, Chris-crossed are the gates steel dead bolts lock,
Above it's embers glow, a fierce eagle with red crimson eyes,
Grapples, it's sharpen claws, cutting deeply into the oaken shields,
On the thatched roof of the golden hall.
A lone wolf beneath therein, passes sniffing at the
Garments of the fallen men, if fears scent, the wolf so smells,
Cast out is this soul, and dammed it is forevermore.
Within the many souls do enter, a hardy welcoming at the feasting
Table mead and honey wine, is set before these hero's of honor.
But outside the ships remain tethered, awaiting for their masters safe
Return, unaware of Thor's approach, his mighty hammer set at the
Ready.
Striking with thunders raw force, the hammer of power, 
Brakes against the sheer ice, as quick as the lightning's flash,
Freezing tidal waves clash upwards, swallowing whole all evidence,
That these ghost ships ever existed.
Oh Valhalla, I pledge thee my life, my fighting spirit, my blood and 
Body given in the name of Odin, for thy honor sake, shall I live and die,
Behold the vow's pledge of these Nordic men, known as the Vikings.

BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Great story on my ancestors my friend. Viking blood flows in my veins. Perhaps I should write a poem based on the Vikings.. Enjoyed this fine free verse! A7
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 6:27 AM
- This was exciting stories we had to read about in history lessons at school :)) - Raw and brutal Vikings who stole, fight, raped and drank beer ----- Truly a wonderful story from you, Cherl !! - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 3:43 AM
mythical and beautiful narrative, cherl... zeus would surely request one on Olympus.. huggs!
Callus Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 10:23 AM
Excellent Viking write, Cherl!! Kept me captive all the way through the icy mists, chilly winds and great imagery. Well done! // paul
Vaso Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:10 PM
Fantastic, amazing!!! Do you by chance have a link of the actual story, as I am sure many here would be fascinated to read of it! As usual a great epic poem!
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