Valerie

The desperate eyes
 pools of water clean.
The river of her past
 I must travel upstream.

In a moment of time
 I am placed in a boat.
Oars are my hands
 I must not float.

I set my heart
 against the flow.
Through snares and branches
 ‘tis her I must know.

Round each bend
 I push my boat.
My arms are tired
 I must never float.

Sometimes raging
 through rapids I go.
Then tranquil and calm
 ‘tis her I must know.

The rushing sound
 a waterfall near.
I know this place
 I have seen this fear.

The torrent of water
 an impassable wall.
How did she survive?
 such a fall.

A waterfall
 I cannot ascend.
To shore I row
 ‘round the next bend.

I carry my boat
 through jungle deep.
Up up the
 mountain steep.

I reach the top
 to see a lake.
Still and calm
 without a wake.

There is current here
 a secret flow.
Pulling you back
 to what is below.

I strain my arms
 and push my boat.
Hands blistered and torn
 I start to float.

I know the fall
 that will come.
‘could she have known
 what could she have done?

I close my eyes
 and feel the fear.
But see the face
 that brought me here.

With longing now
 I strain my heart.
To see the eyes
 at the start.

I push I fight
 my life is spent.
Madness takes me
 my clothes are rent.

I wildly thrash
 and move my boat.
‘gainst the flow
 I will not float!

I break through
 the barrier unseen.
I am near
 I rest I dream.

Then I see
 my longing found
Where two black pools
 and love abound.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 11:45 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 25, 2016 at 7:19 PM
PAUL, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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