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Valerie (Part 2)

I saw her to her dorm room, and asked if I might have the pleasure of her company later for dinner. She coyly accepted my invitation.. One hour later I picked her up. She looked enchanting... We drove out to Woodstock, home to Blenheim Palace, the ancestral seat of the Churchill family. There we enjoyed a casual meal, laughing again over the misadventures of the afternoon. As the sun was beginning to set I led her outside the restaurant and down the lane to the corner. I told her to keep her eyes closed. When she opened them she saw a vista she would never forget; the palace, high on a hill, a fairy-tale vision, with pastureland sloping down to a lake in the foreground dotted with swans, all bathed in the glow of the setting sun. She stood there, speechless for a moment. I squeezed her hand and we gazed into each other's eyes. Not a word was spoken. We were both grateful for the day we had spent together. It was just the two of us. Time had stopped, and only that moment mattered.

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Date: 12/24/2008 5:03:00 AM
This is the perfect ending to a lovely story. The imagery is beauitful. Reading it leaves you with a happy and contented feeling. Excellent write, Keith. Thank you for sharing this beautiful moment. Love, Robin
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Date: 12/23/2008 5:49:00 PM
Isn't it amazing how a day like this can stick in your memory, each detail so vivid, for the rest of your life? I think we sometimes don't recognize the happiest days while they are happening, until we reflect on them later. A lovely narration...both parts 1 and 2! Enjoyed sharing that day with you! ~ Carrie
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