Valentines Verdict

they fall into my lap, unresistant.
chocolate, the size of a silver dollar.

sensation of mint betwixt my fingers.
I bite into each one, its cool breath

second to none.  Godiva
ceased production of these tongue trinkets.

love pales with petals and Russell Stover…

my husband and I hold hands,
press our temples together and sigh

with the sprightly rush of memory.

Mrs. Field’s fresh Cookies a close second
especially tasty at Fisherman’s Wharf.

still I gladly accept tulips in a väse,
its life-giving water, and caramel dreams.

my heartthrob beams awaiting the verdict —
it’s Valentine’s Day. he’s pretty sure I am his.

holding daisy by the stem —
she loves me, she loves me not

just to be sure, he’s counted each petal beforehand.
eleven flowers on the floor — for pity sake.

1/31/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 7:43 PM
I expected a romantic love poem. I was thrilled to receive sweet chocolate surprises along the way.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 7:52 PM
Glad you enjoyed :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Gosh Kim, you really have a case here, you have been the judge and jury and how right the verdict is - for pity sake - having said that, my husband always surprises me on Valentines day, he's just a honeybunch. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Mine too! We met on Valentine’s Day! Every...every event he buys me a Precious Moment figurine. I am quite spoiled and loved. This poem is meant to be funny ;)
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 5:24 AM
Is there one petal left? I hope it ends on she loves me. I hope this is the best Valentine's Day up to this point in your life and may each one that follows be awesome. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Of course it does. You can count on that!
Poteet Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Love the players in your "court"room drama here from the chocolate down to the lowly väse. Enjoyable read of the interplay of brand names too. What worthy judge would sustain the complaint of a missing 12th petal on the daisy? My, what a delightful piece for the coming holiday.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 2:39 PM
Thank you so much, Reason!
Horsman Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 8:14 PM
So this is a verdict of valentine Kim, Sound good to me...love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Thank you :)
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 6:10 PM
He's just making sure... After all he IS a man, you know. Just think: If he gave you a bunch of 9 tulips, you'd have 18 lips. ~ HVD, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 4:29 AM
LOL!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 12:54 PM
A gourmet and a faithful lover. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 4:49 PM
:) Smiling! God bless ya!
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