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Valentine's Orchard

My heart,
An arid land was
Unamble a single feeling to produce
Till that Valentine's day
When
Into my life, she walked,

And

With her kind words
Her soft caresses
Her moistening kisses,
Succeded in turning it
Into a plentiful orchard of 
Love!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   11 FEBRUARY 2015

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2015

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Liam Mcdaid Date: 2/14/2015 2:06:00 PM very beautifully painted demetrios not been on line much these days wishing you a blessed beautiful valentines Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/16/2015 3:29:00 AM Liam, my friend, how wonderful to see you again. Thank you for your visit and comment!

Emile Pinet Date: 2/11/2015 3:46:00 PM Wow...you inject this poem with fresh love and a lively spirit. Your work confronts beauty in its totality and comes up a winner, supplying a subtle grace that is gently distributed throughout your poem. Emile. #7 Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/12/2015 1:19:00 AM Kind, Sir, hardly my humble poem deserves such a glorious comment and grading, however, I thank you from the depths of my heart for your visit and your noble appraisal.

David Meade Date: 2/11/2015 2:19:00 PM Delightful dear friend . . . sweet is the gardening of the orchard . . . a wonderful refuge of love. 7 Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 3:12:00 PM Yes, my friend, David! With the Lord's blessing the orchard is, as you say " a wonderful refuge of love." Thank you for your generosity!

Eve Roper Date: 2/11/2015 12:21:00 PM Beautiful Valentine poem, Demetrios. May you and your wife and family have a wonderful Valentines Day with lots of blessings. Eve Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 1:55:00 PM Thank you so much my good friend, Eve! God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/11/2015 7:01:00 AM - From my heart: Beautiful! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 8:46:00 AM Anne-Lise, my friend, so wonderful to receive your visit and precious comment!

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/11/2015 6:56:00 AM Thrilling....in every way!!! Oh...how superbly sweet! May the orchard produce for long the delicious fruit of love. Hugs Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 8:45:00 AM You are so kind my dearest poetess to visit and comment once again! Thank you so much, dear Eileen!

Kp Nunez Date: 2/11/2015 5:12:00 AM Simply beautiful and sweet, sire. A 7. Happy Valentine's, sire. Smiles from the land of thousand isles. Kim :) Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 5:34:00 AM Welcome my dear, Kim, from " the land of thousand isles", thank you so much for you dear visit and lovely comment not to forget your generous grading! Greece, although small in comparison, has thrice the number of islands but...small ones! Ha-ha!

Tim Smith Date: 2/11/2015 4:10:00 AM That orchard is still producing. Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 4:51:00 AM Oh, yes, my good friend, Tim! Thank God for it!

Jan Allison Date: 2/11/2015 3:19:00 AM oh how romantic - love is in the air :-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/11/2015 3:26:00 AM It is lovely when you get such a lovely surprise - I got POD last week and didn't know until i got comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/11/2015 3:24:00 AM Thank you , Jan! You are inspiring! Thank you also for informing me about the POTD!