Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Free verse

Valentine's Orchard

My heart,
An arid land was
Unamble a single feeling to produce
Till that Valentine's day
When
Into my life, she walked,

And

With her kind words
Her soft caresses
Her moistening kisses,
Succeded in turning it
Into a plentiful orchard of 
Love!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   11 FEBRUARY 2015

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Liam Mcdaid February 14, 2015 at 2:06 PM very beautifully painted demetrios not been on line much these days wishing you a blessed beautiful valentines Demetrios Trifiatis February 16, 2015 at 3:29 AM Liam, my friend, how wonderful to see you again. Thank you for your visit and comment!

Emile Pinet February 11, 2015 at 3:46 PM Wow...you inject this poem with fresh love and a lively spirit. Your work confronts beauty in its totality and comes up a winner, supplying a subtle grace that is gently distributed throughout your poem. Emile. #7 Demetrios Trifiatis February 12, 2015 at 1:19 AM Kind, Sir, hardly my humble poem deserves such a glorious comment and grading, however, I thank you from the depths of my heart for your visit and your noble appraisal.

David Meade February 11, 2015 at 2:19 PM Delightful dear friend . . . sweet is the gardening of the orchard . . . a wonderful refuge of love. 7 Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 3:12 PM Yes, my friend, David! With the Lord's blessing the orchard is, as you say " a wonderful refuge of love." Thank you for your generosity!

Eve Roper February 11, 2015 at 12:21 PM Beautiful Valentine poem, Demetrios. May you and your wife and family have a wonderful Valentines Day with lots of blessings. Eve Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 1:55 PM Thank you so much my good friend, Eve! God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 11, 2015 at 7:01 AM - From my heart: Beautiful! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 8:46 AM Anne-Lise, my friend, so wonderful to receive your visit and precious comment!

Eileen Manassian February 11, 2015 at 6:56 AM Thrilling....in every way!!! Oh...how superbly sweet! May the orchard produce for long the delicious fruit of love. Hugs Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 8:45 AM You are so kind my dearest poetess to visit and comment once again! Thank you so much, dear Eileen!

Kp Nunez February 11, 2015 at 5:12 AM Simply beautiful and sweet, sire. A 7. Happy Valentine's, sire. Smiles from the land of thousand isles. Kim :) Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 5:34 AM Welcome my dear, Kim, from " the land of thousand isles", thank you so much for you dear visit and lovely comment not to forget your generous grading! Greece, although small in comparison, has thrice the number of islands but...small ones! Ha-ha!

Tim Smith February 11, 2015 at 4:10 AM That orchard is still producing. Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 4:51 AM Oh, yes, my good friend, Tim! Thank God for it!

Jan Allison February 11, 2015 at 3:19 AM oh how romantic - love is in the air :-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison February 11, 2015 at 3:26 AM It is lovely when you get such a lovely surprise - I got POD last week and didn't know until i got comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx Demetrios Trifiatis February 11, 2015 at 3:24 AM Thank you , Jan! You are inspiring! Thank you also for informing me about the POTD!