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Valentine's Ellip Contest Sponsor: Gigno Our first summer, love swept in romance. Tender moments, hearts were kept, let's dance. Honeyed tender, I slept, as you glanced. Two become one, connect, just one chance. Bright orange sun, reflect, let's enhance. Proposal, I accept, let's find France. My dear man, you are mine, valentine. Poetry Form: Ellip Date Written: February 24, 2016

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Date: 3/22/2016 2:08:00 AM
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Date: 2/26/2016 7:59:00 PM
SWEET, Laura Loo and very well done. I just read Jan's poem about you. This same thing happened to my poor mom last month. Her ankle is just barely healed now. Take care and I hope for your quick recovery.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/27/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)-luloo
Date: 2/25/2016 8:31:00 AM
I haven't read what this contest is about but it's not necessary to enjoy your lovely verses.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2016 1:49:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lin :)-luloo
Date: 2/24/2016 5:50:00 PM
Well done, Laura Loo, well done indeed. All the best in the contest ... CayCay
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/24/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady! thanks for pushing me to write this!! Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 2/24/2016 3:04:00 PM
Third verse is my favorite. Really nice feminine touch. Really nice, Laura. You romantic little devil you. Peace dear poet:)
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:19:00 PM
Yeah I guess I have a few romantic tendencies hehe Thank you :) Appreciate your kind feedback! -luloo

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