Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Valentine's Ellip Contest

Valentine's Ellip Contest
Sponsor: Gigno


Our first summer,
love swept
in romance.

Tender moments,
hearts were kept,
let's dance.

Honeyed tender,
I slept,
as you glanced.

Two become 
one, connect,
just one chance.

Bright orange
sun, reflect,
let's enhance.

Proposal,
I accept,
let's find France. 

My dear man,
you are mine,
valentine.

Poetry Form: Ellip

Date Written: February 24, 2016

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... Gigno March 22, 2016 at 2:08 AM !!!

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2016 at 7:59 PM SWEET, Laura Loo and very well done. I just read Jan's poem about you. This same thing happened to my poor mom last month. Her ankle is just barely healed now. Take care and I hope for your quick recovery. Beautiful Scars February 27, 2016 at 10:57 AM Thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Lin Lane February 25, 2016 at 8:31 AM I haven't read what this contest is about but it's not necessary to enjoy your lovely verses. Beautiful Scars February 25, 2016 at 1:49 PM Thank you lovely Lin :)-luloo

CayCay Godwin February 24, 2016 at 5:50 PM Well done, Laura Loo, well done indeed. All the best in the contest ... CayCay Beautiful Scars February 24, 2016 at 8:28 PM Thank you sweet lady! thanks for pushing me to write this!! Be blessed :)-luloo

Daniel Turner February 24, 2016 at 3:04 PM Third verse is my favorite. Really nice feminine touch. Really nice, Laura. You romantic little devil you. Peace dear poet:) Beautiful Scars February 24, 2016 at 3:19 PM Yeah I guess I have a few romantic tendencies hehe Thank you :) Appreciate your kind feedback! -luloo