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Valentine's Day Sweets

A tongue with good luck is embraced By a honeyed candy-like taste This holiday treat Is a fabulous eat And lies under silk lingerie laced

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/11/2015 3:52:00 PM
I see this made Robin blush. Very sexy one!
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/12/2015 7:56:00 AM
Yes, funny how we feel about this sort of thing. But it is heaven with the right person.
Date: 10/4/2013 8:06:00 AM
There is a hidden sensual message in this write. You make the reader blush at the end. Nice job
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/12/2015 8:02:00 AM
Well--it's only a small part of the crazy life we all lead. Nothing to really be too obsessed over or too restrained to write about.
Date: 3/1/2013 8:10:00 PM
Duke, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/12/2015 8:09:00 AM
OMG, I never realized I won a contest! This was a while back. Sometimes I surprise myself with these funny ideas. This one was unusual because it sort of just popped into my head.
Date: 2/20/2013 12:36:00 AM
Delicious. Glad to take a bite of this poem! (: Wonderfully written Duke. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:52:00 PM
Well, this is quite nice Duke ;}
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 2/17/2013 4:07:00 PM
Debbie, thanks. The inspiration for this (in my head) was originally a piece of candy wrapped in a fancy piece of perforated paper. As I was thinking about it, the instinctive evil part of me took over. I think this really fits the "limerick" bill of fare.
Date: 2/15/2013 6:11:00 PM
Sounds like a very sweet Valentine's day! Sultry write! Hugs
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/12/2015 8:44:00 AM
It can be sweet at any time, and we there is love it is the stuff which could make a Madison Avenue candy commercial developer stop and take notice. I am thinking of a commercial for almond joy or mounds--indescribably delicious was the term they used. Apologies for the late response here.
Date: 2/14/2013 9:06:00 AM
It sounds like somebody's gonna have a good 14th of Feb! Great limerick... Terry
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/12/2015 8:35:00 AM
I was brought back to this page by a recent comment, and saw (to my dismay) that I hadn't responded to you. For that I apologize. You are a kindred spirit, and I enjoyed reading a bit of your work just now. You have a very interesting way of putting your ideas together. You are a treasure, and I hope that we can preserve some of the beauty we have inherited by living here.
Date: 2/14/2013 7:33:00 AM
Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one..A very subtle message..Sara
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 10/12/2015 8:10:00 AM
Sara--this is a very late response, but I truly am flattered and appreciate your comment very much.