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Valentine's Day Dance

First date
Can't wait

Red heart
Good start

Her dad
Looked sad

The Dance
Romance

The Kiss
Pure Bliss

girlfriend-boyfriendlovefootle

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

February 17, 2012 at 1:34 PM

Congrats on your win. "Her dad looked sad", is one of my faves in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2012 at 9:48 AM

I sure remember this one. Congrats, sweetie. Would like to have seen all these HM's also on the numbered list. they are GREAT. Luv, Andrea

Samual Ronthorpe

February 16, 2012 at 10:43 AM

Barbara, wonderful set of footles. I really enjoyed them, well done. Congratulations for your HM win in Dane Ann's contest.......S.Ronthorpe

Joyce Johnson

February 16, 2012 at 9:23 AM

Congratulations Barbara. Stands high along with the top winners. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 16, 2012 at 8:56 AM

congrats BG on HM for a great set of Valentine Footles luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 16, 2012 at 8:55 AM

Congrats on your win Barbara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2012 at 5:58 PM

oh, btw,I can't do the other three footles for the contest (i'll be over five) but maybe I will try later to write three more for another post!

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2012 at 5:53 PM

hahaha, I love the part: her dad looked sad! Hilarious in the middle!! And the rest very nice.

Cindy Lu

February 8, 2012 at 2:54 PM

very well done. cute.

Valentine's Day Dance

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