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Written for the Valentine senryu contest sponsored by Tania Kitchin

but to be your sky must I paint the moon in red ~ valentine vampire

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/15/2025 9:42:00 AM

IE, Interesting thought...how do you get the attention of someone you might like to have around? I think your poem answers the question...we really have to go with the flow and just see what happens. There's nothing like letting fate work its magic. You express a lot of wisdom here. Smiles, of course!!! I mean we really don't have to act like a monster to get what we want. We're better off letting it go rather than using up so much paint!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write you have here. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:11:00 PM

It's so cool how you did a vampire one. Love it, Ink.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 1:57:00 PM

IE, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative senryu.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/7/2025 11:23:00 PM

congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Valsa George

Date: 2/7/2025 10:09:00 PM

Excellent.... ! Flying far after hitting the mark. A sure winner, dear friend.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/7/2025 9:25:00 PM

To gain affection of the person one desires-very nice.

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:51:00 PM

Thank you so much dear akham

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/7/2025 8:57:00 PM

Wow wow wow that's absolutely miles beyond the mainstream and just reflecting the uniqueness of your style, my sweet ink!! What an incredible honour and pleasure it is to be able to read your words after so long, and it always comes as a refreshing breeze for me, as you know how much I adore ur poetry hah! Valentine vampire... who can ever imagine this astounding way of describing, it's almost spooky yet metaphorically rich at the same time ~ "but to be your sky must I paint the moon in red" My goodness, that speaks the depth of a thousand moons to me!! A love that's tragic and haunting, that's always bloodthirsty even after giving our all. Stunning! Best wishes for the contest, you nailed this senryu and it's one of my favorites from you ~ keep shining always!

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:51:00 PM

Awwn you are so sweet sweet hiya, thank you for your kind and generous feedback on my senryu! Iv definitely missed having you around and reading you on soup too! Welcome back! Stick around a little longer haha i love having you on soup thank you so much again for your kindness and fave too

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/7/2025 8:12:00 PM

I like this unusual poem. I enjoy the fusing of Halloween and Valentine Day. Good luck with the contest.

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:37:00 PM

Thank you so much dear hilda. Always grateful for your kind support

Paige Hind

Date: 2/7/2025 4:18:00 PM

Very beautiful in a few words

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:23:00 PM

Awwwn

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/7/2025 2:33:00 PM

Heya Ink! Valentine vampire has a certain cuteness to it, also a hint of passionate danger, which brings a sense of poetic duality to your work, a very clever little verse, love it! Cheers David

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:23:00 PM

Thank you so much dear David for your kindness and support and how youv analyzed my poem, its truly an honor. Grateful

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/7/2025 8:45:00 AM

This is the sweetest and romantic,yet, and I read so many...took me back to some vampiros I've known...ha! GL ink ... I did a Be My 'Palentine' card for pal's in '23 ;) but Galentine even better! Read below. Love it

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:16:00 AM

Ahh thats so cool " palentine" haha. Im thinking of getting my twin sister too a galentine gift! Hah awwn. Thank you so much sweet anaya for saying this is romantic. Appreciate always your kindness

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2025 7:17:00 AM

Interesting work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 9:15:00 AM

Thank you sweet sara grateful for your support

Suzette Richards

Date: 2/7/2025 6:41:00 AM

Red sky at night, .... delight. I would expose my neck looking up. You are devious, Ink ... Lol

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 6:47:00 AM

Haha thats cute! Thank you dear suzette. Appreciate your visit truly

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/7/2025 5:28:00 AM

Ahh I've read this 5 times already today and every time it makes me smile and think. I'm binge watching Buffy at the moment, so that element gets embroiled in my reading, but the complexities of love are painted here. Good luck in the contest. (I also enjoy Lionesses comments so much that a repeat visit to catch them is a regular occurrence haha.)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/7/2025 7:05:00 AM

Haha now I feel like I crashed the party lol

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 2/7/2025 5:48:00 AM

Awwween !!! Much much love to you too dillly dally … ink !!! Must galantines day! The creatures here make me wanna khalasss them or I khalasss myself !! Dunno aeee… so screw these creature screw everything!!! Grrrrrrl!! U me n the skyyyyyyyyyyy full of stars !!!! Galantines day

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 5:38:00 AM

Hahah i feel so sorry sometimes for men, on valentines day, they have to run around looking for roses just to prove their love: haha but yea its a mix of both youv got it right! Lioness supposed to confirm if she would like to be my galentine o nah. Haha lol she is funny, even in real life , i must let her know she has admirers for her comments . Thank you so much for your kind support

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/7/2025 5:19:00 AM

lol this made me smile, let me provide you with a brush and red paint, and you go to it girl, :)

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 5:35:00 AM

Hahah sweet rose! Im glad it did make you smile! Thank you for the red paint and brush :D

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/7/2025 4:42:00 AM

red is the perfect color for vampires, enjoyed

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 5:34:00 AM

Ahh i thought so, thank you dear yann! Appreciate your visit

Robert James Liguori

Date: 2/7/2025 2:06:00 AM

Best senryu ever!!!! A little haunting though. Oh those clever vampires!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 3:49:00 AM

Thank you dear robert for your enthusiastic comment! It is a bit haunting isnt it. Appreciate your support always

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 2/7/2025 2:03:00 AM

Exquisite 3 lines ! Very unusual...Yes ! What Valentines require is often so much.U have a clear eye for satire. ThkU so much for taking time to comment on my last offering. Hug.x

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 3:48:00 AM

Hahah feels like we have to do so much on valentines day to prove our love , thank you so much, im not very good with satire but you sure are a strong feeler of emotions within words

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2025 1:58:00 AM

- WOOOW ... I love valentine proposals that aren't about roses and chocolate :) - GL in the contest, Ink :) - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 3:45:00 AM

That means alot dear anne lise! Thank you so very much truly

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2025 1:37:00 AM

Much as I adore your poetry, my neck is out of bounds. Happy Valentine's Day.

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 3:45:00 AM

Thats a fun response! Thank you dear victor, i wish the same for you

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 2/6/2025 11:20:00 PM

but to be your skymust I paint the moon in red …..valentine vampire Omgod!!!!! My sky!!!! Mmmm talk sexy to me papiii yeaaaaaz! Gorgeous!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 2/7/2025 5:54:00 AM

Hahhaha!! Who do they wanna show off to? What are they getting! Pedicure or manicure? Or deep cleansing?

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 2/7/2025 5:45:00 AM

This galatine is good idea!!! We must do galatine …. This stupid valentine is making me gastric!!!! Galentine is good !!! That’s like 40mg oesomeprazole!!!! ( if that is the wrong pronunciation dhn excuse the dumbness … the men I have been exposed to killed too many brain cells in my brain ..) XD

Ink Empress
Date: 2/6/2025 11:22:00 PM

Hahah papi u funny , will u be my galentine? Lolol

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 2/6/2025 11:11:00 PM

Wow’ I’m posting on Valentine’s Day . But I’ll give you credits for sure

Ink Empress
Date: 2/6/2025 11:23:00 PM

Awwn thnk u dahlin! You might be able to write a better senryu. But im honored