VALENTINE NIGHTMARE

VALENTINE NIGHTMARE
An octogenarian swain Went down on one knee, in some pain. His proposal rejected, He was feeling dejected. Then couldn’t stand upright again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations on your winner in the Valentine limerick contest. Way to go. Sara K
Flood Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Yeah… but aren’t there pills for that? Congrats on your win, Bryn. Terry
Miller Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:18 AM
Brilliant!
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Perfect Bryn! Congratulations! :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Bryn, a clever and cute limerick, congratulations on your winning placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 8:08 PM
So great!
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