Constance La France Poet Free verse

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Valentine Love

 
              I have a terrible crush
          on a man living in my building,
      he makes my heart skip, flip, flop and tremble.
          I adore his dark longish hair,
  his smile and his deep voice and I think he likes me.
  But, he has not made a move yet to ask me out !
     Oh, I wish I could get the courage,
        and ask him for a Valentine supper; 
 then, a card from him at my door that I tear open
              asking me . . .  Will You Be Mine !

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January 08, 2022

Poetry/Free Verse/Valentine Love
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1419-950-08
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance LaFrance

Written for the Premier contest, Be Mine
sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 01/19/2022

Seventh Place

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Beata Agustin January 20, 2022 at 3:38 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Constance La France January 20, 2022 at 10:17 AM Beata, thanks for the congrats ~

Connie Marcum Wong January 19, 2022 at 7:09 AM Valentine’s Day brings these kind of dreams into manifestation. Make it happen through visualization. Very sweet Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo Constance La France January 19, 2022 at 10:04 AM Connie, thanks for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings _Constance

Christuraj Alex January 19, 2022 at 7:03 AM "then, a card from him at my door that I tear open asking me . . . Will You Be Mine !" - Great surprise and wish fulfilling. Congratulations! Constance La France January 19, 2022 at 10:05 AM Christuraj, thanks for the comment, compliment and congratulations _Constance

Regina Mcintosh January 19, 2022 at 4:00 AM Love this sweet friend. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina Constance La France January 19, 2022 at 10:05 AM Gina, thanks for the compliment and congrats, God bless _Constance