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Heart, Valentine, Love, Affection, Red, Pink

I have a terrible crush on a man living in my building, he makes my heart skip, flip, flop and tremble. I adore his dark longish hair, his smile and his deep voice and I think he likes me. But, he has not made a move yet to ask me out ! Oh, I wish I could get the courage, and ask him for a Valentine supper; then, a card from him at my door that I tear open asking me . . . Will You Be Mine ! ___________________________ January 08, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/Valentine Love Copyright Protected, ID 01-1419-950-08 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance LaFrance Written for the Premier contest, Be Mine sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 01/19/2022 Seventh Place

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Date: 1/20/2022 3:38:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2022 10:17:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 1/19/2022 7:09:00 AM
Valentine’s Day brings these kind of dreams into manifestation. Make it happen through visualization. Very sweet Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2022 10:04:00 AM
Connie, thanks for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings _Constance
Date: 1/19/2022 7:03:00 AM
"then, a card from him at my door that I tear open asking me . . . Will You Be Mine !" - Great surprise and wish fulfilling. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2022 10:05:00 AM
Christuraj, thanks for the comment, compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 1/19/2022 4:00:00 AM
Love this sweet friend. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2022 10:05:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment and congrats, God bless _Constance