Valentine, I Wish You Well

Flew past me on the gustiest of gales.
I saw, but a glimpse as you still did sail.
My one great chance, neither head, nor of tail.
I stumbled on a rose, sharp as a nail!

My hair was askew, my attire a mess.
Me, a grain of sand, she a fine red dress.
All for naught, I loved our meet more than less.
This sacred moment, to curse and to bless!

And at ponder-some times when I can't sleep,
Gazing upon that distant starry sea,
I dream that cruel and impossible dream,
That you caught, but the faintest glimpse of me.

The rare and magnificent star that fell.
The briefest of moments, but she was swell.
And in this tale I weave only time will tell.
But oh valentine, how I wish you well!



For the Unbearable Beauty Contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 9:22 AM
really very beautifully penned tim
Hicks Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 10:54 AM
You like the more romantic and passionate writes... so I can see why you like this one!
Seal Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Try whistling next time Tim, lol, nice write on ships that pass in the street. Take care, Richard
Hicks Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 11:51 PM
... ha ha. Well I've never been the "assertive-type"... perhaps that's a weakness of mine.
Delaney Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 8:48 PM
Enjoyed your romantic musing Timothy: Keep posting more.
Hicks Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:39 PM
Thank you Suzanne! I shall try my best to keep sharing :)
Maharaj Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 7:14 AM
arr love it Tim :) Beautiful and romantically sweet :)
Hicks Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Sasha! I'm trying to post more "romantically inclined" stuff to show it's no impossible for me... lol.
Anglesey Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Your distant and vivid memory shines through. Another remarkable write from you. I bow to your superb talent
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 10:17 PM
Wow, Karen... not sure what to say other than a big thank you. You are so kind!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 7:47 PM
See comment below.
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 10:16 PM
Thanks Rick... you are really very encouraging and uplifting!
Buil Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Great write Timothy!! I loved every word. Had me entranced from the start. Loved the way you captured the girl with even though a fleeting glance, one that will never leave your memory! ;)
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 6:27 PM
Some people just do that to you ;) Pleased you liked it... this one is a bit more true to me, even if nothing ever happened from seeing her... just a distant vivid memory.
Van Breda Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 8:38 AM
Stunning descriptive write. Enjoyed this... thanks for sharing.
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Thank you Kim! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 7:24 AM
This is so romantic Tim!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 7:47 PM
You have skills my friend. There is a very lucky lady out there for you.
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 6:25 PM
Not what you were expecting, eh? Pleased you enjoyed!
Sivey Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 5:30 AM
I'm with Eileen on this one, you do have some romance within you my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly enlightening poem this morning! What a tremendous piece, this valentine didn't know what she was missing as she sped on by! Great Work!!
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Well I try Russell! I try to delve into ALL subjects as much as I can. Your comments are always so encouraging... thanks!
Manassian Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Awwwwww....and you said you didn't have romance in you! Could have fooled me with this write, my dear! I'm proud of you! :)
Hicks Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Haha... well I actually have written romantic pieces before. Though I don't typically post 'em just cause I have too many to decide which ones... a weird problem to have, I suppose. Glad YOU liked them... coming from the poet who's all about it I don't take your comment lightly!
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