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Valentine Haiku

the tide sweeps the sand your name written by my hand gone, but not forgotten

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Date: 1/16/2012 5:19:00 PM

barbara, you forgot to put XOX world . otherwise I think it would have placed higher. Belated congrats to you, sweetie.

Date: 1/16/2012 2:02:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Date: 1/14/2012 11:39:00 AM

CONGRATS BG ON A GRAND EXCITING WIN FOR LOVELY ENTRY ..

Date: 1/13/2012 1:49:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, BB! Love, Annalise

Date: 1/13/2012 2:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara x

Date: 1/12/2012 10:14:00 PM

Barbara, congratulations on winning in PD's contest with this haiku.

Date: 1/12/2012 9:37:00 PM

Barbara... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.

Date: 1/12/2012 5:45:00 PM

so so so deep.

Date: 1/8/2012 8:37:00 PM

I like this a lot, Barbara. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Date: 1/8/2012 7:57:00 PM

love it- well done, Brenda : )

Date: 1/8/2012 7:25:00 PM

I like this hope it wins