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VALENTINE GIRL Who are you, I am your Valentine, What do you want, To be your Valentine, Where are you from, Deep in your heart, Will you stay For eternity, Am I yours, For as long as we live, What’s your age, Twenty one, you opened My door to love, So you love me, With beating heart, You excite me, what Do I call you, My Valentine, as I Call you mine. My Valentine Is Your pulse racing, Yes, I can smell Your scent, Show yourself Valentine, Not yet time, How shall I wait, Count our nights apart And then a lifetime together, Valentine don’t go, Just for a couple Of weeks my love, Will I know it’s you, Immediately you will, Valentine I love you, Love me as you do, My love is overpowering For you. Valentine, give me Your hand, I want to feel your heart, Sweet girl, I’m yours, Until we say Amen!

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Date: 2/13/2024 10:59:00 AM
Jennifer Jennifer Jennifer. Hello. Of course I had to see this entry (smile). This is beautiful and I loved the emotion that radiates through such as "I want to feel your heart". That is poetic and marvelous. Truly. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. I will return again soon. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 1/31/2019 5:00:00 AM
Very romantic! Written by someone deeply in love. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Kim
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Date: 1/26/2019 7:58:00 PM
How unique! This is very different in a most delightful, engaging way. The title led me to choose this one to read, couldn't resist. Love how playfully you composed and executed this cupid gem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 1/26/2019 12:54:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, This is sweet and romantic. I also found it alluring and mysterious at the same time. Don't get me wrong I really enjoyed it , but that is what I felt after reading it . Well done:-) Soup Mail
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Date: 1/26/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hi Alexis, Then I had the desired effect on you! It truly was meant to be alluring and mysterious. Thank-you for a lovely and honest comment! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/19/2019 11:11:00 AM
A sweet poem that was delightful to read, Jennifer! Enjoyed this! :)
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Date: 1/19/2019 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Laura , a little early, but the anticipation and the excitement is in the waiting which is what this poem is all about. Thanks for the visit Laura. Stay well, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/18/2019 10:58:00 PM
A very romantic Valentine's poem!
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Date: 1/18/2019 11:39:00 PM
Thanks Michelle, I think of a heart as an entity of it own, it beats endlessly so that we may live, but it also loves with a passion which compares to nothing on earth! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/17/2019 6:57:00 PM
very appealing poem, Jennifer! Janice
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Date: 1/17/2019 10:50:00 PM
Hi Janice, I thought it would be different if the heart, who was already in love, could also tell and speak to this young woman itself, and tell her how much he was in love with her! Thanks for stopping by have a wonderful day. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/17/2019 3:52:00 PM
Lovely and very romantic, Jenny. This Valentine girl knew what she was after and made sure she got it (him)! Regards // paul
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Date: 1/17/2019 10:44:00 PM
She sure did Paul! It was love at first heart for these two young people. If I could have a Christmas Tree talking, why not a talking heart Thanks for the comment Paul, have a lovely day. Warm regards, Jennifer.
Date: 1/16/2019 1:05:00 PM
- An unknown ... but still known ... a lovely poem to Valentine, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2019 1:24:00 PM
Thank-you Sunshine Smile, a very unknown known entity, you are so right! Your kind smile is captivating - thank-you for your visit. Poetry hugs, jennifer.
Date: 1/16/2019 6:25:00 AM
I like the part--not yet time. It is so thought provoking. You make me think about fate and destiny. All the other strange things that randomly affect us and the path we take through life. Thanks for being here. I can't get here every day, but I will always get back to you eventually as long as I have not yet dropped dead or reached an equivalent state!!
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Date: 1/16/2019 1:21:00 PM
Hi Duke, what a lovely, lovely surprise! I,m so glad you enjoyed my Valentine poem, sat doodling at my desk and it sort of found its own flow! Yes destiny is a mystery, and takes mysterious paths in our lifetimes, it sometimes even takes curves and corners that we don't expect! Take care, poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/15/2019 5:51:00 PM
How deliciously invigorating a heart can be especially on Valentines day, Lovely verse, I say Amen to that.
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Date: 1/15/2019 11:07:00 PM
A lovely reply and comment Pixie Dust, It certainly is and our heart's special day is just around the corner! Couples in love here in South Africa go bananas on this day. Poetry hugs and wishes, Jennifer.
Date: 1/15/2019 5:33:00 PM
as sweet as Valentine candy! Oh, I need to track down one of the poems you told me to see!!
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Date: 1/15/2019 11:15:00 PM
Hi my friend, you actually have to read cry of an angel first and then you'll see why I wrote an answer to a prayer. A lovely description for my Valentine poem thanks Andrea. Don't know if its night or day for you so I think in my next soup mail i'll explain this side of the world's day and night time hours, and it would be great if you could please also Love and poetry hugs, Jenny
Date: 1/15/2019 2:05:00 AM
Love is in the air, a very romantic verse Jennifer. Tom.
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Date: 1/15/2019 8:55:00 AM
Hi Tom, It certainly is - somehow I think it is becoming more popular for the woman to propose on Valentine Day and this year i think will take the cake. Thanks for the comment Tom. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/14/2019 4:50:00 PM
sweet interpretation of valentine's , jen... must be love!...huggs
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Date: 1/14/2019 10:35:00 PM
Hi Nette, Thank-you - it always has been a special day for me and now my husband makes it even more so. Loads of hugs, Jennifer

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