Valentine Girl

VALENTINE GIRL

Who are you,
I am your Valentine,
What do you want,
To be your Valentine,
Where are you from,
Deep in your heart,
Will you stay
For eternity,
Am I yours,
For as long as we live,
What’s your age,
Twenty one, you opened
My door to love,
So you love me,
With beating heart,
You excite me, what
Do I call you,
My Valentine, as I
Call you mine.
My Valentine Is
Your pulse racing,
Yes, I can smell
Your scent,
Show yourself Valentine,
Not yet time,
How shall I wait,
Count our nights apart
And then a lifetime together,
Valentine don’t go,
Just for a couple
Of weeks my love,
Will I know it’s you,
Immediately you will,
Valentine I love you,
Love me as you do,
My love is overpowering
For you.
Valentine, give me 
Your hand,
I want to feel your heart,
Sweet girl, I’m yours,
Until we say Amen!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ricci Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Jennifer Jennifer Jennifer. Hello. Of course I had to see this entry (smile). This is beautiful and I loved the emotion that radiates through such as "I want to feel your heart". That is poetic and marvelous. Truly. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. I will return again soon. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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January 31, 2019 at 5:00 AM
Very romantic! Written by someone deeply in love. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Kim
Godwin Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 7:58 PM
How unique! This is very different in a most delightful, engaging way. The title led me to choose this one to read, couldn't resist. Love how playfully you composed and executed this cupid gem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Y. Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 12:54 AM
Hi Jennifer, This is sweet and romantic. I also found it alluring and mysterious at the same time. Don't get me wrong I really enjoyed it , but that is what I felt after reading it . Well done:-) Soup Mail
Proxenos Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Hi Alexis, Then I had the desired effect on you! It truly was meant to be alluring and mysterious. Thank-you for a lovely and honest comment! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Leiser Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:11 AM
A sweet poem that was delightful to read, Jennifer! Enjoyed this! :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 19, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Thanks Laura , a little early, but the anticipation and the excitement is in the waiting which is what this poem is all about. Thanks for the visit Laura. Stay well, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Faulkner Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 10:58 PM
A very romantic Valentine's poem!
Proxenos Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 11:39 PM
Thanks Michelle, I think of a heart as an entity of it own, it beats endlessly so that we may live, but it also loves with a passion which compares to nothing on earth! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 6:57 PM
very appealing poem, Jennifer! Janice
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 10:50 PM
Hi Janice, I thought it would be different if the heart, who was already in love, could also tell and speak to this young woman itself, and tell her how much he was in love with her! Thanks for stopping by have a wonderful day. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Lovely and very romantic, Jenny. This Valentine girl knew what she was after and made sure she got it (him)! Regards // paul
Proxenos Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 10:44 PM
She sure did Paul! It was love at first heart for these two young people. If I could have a Christmas Tree talking, why not a talking heart Thanks for the comment Paul, have a lovely day. Warm regards, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 1:05 PM
- An unknown ... but still known ... a lovely poem to Valentine, Jennifer :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 1:24 PM
Thank-you Sunshine Smile, a very unknown known entity, you are so right! Your kind smile is captivating - thank-you for your visit. Poetry hugs, jennifer.
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January 16, 2019 at 6:25 AM
I like the part--not yet time. It is so thought provoking. You make me think about fate and destiny. All the other strange things that randomly affect us and the path we take through life. Thanks for being here. I can't get here every day, but I will always get back to you eventually as long as I have not yet dropped dead or reached an equivalent state!!
Proxenos Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Hi Duke, what a lovely, lovely surprise! I,m so glad you enjoyed my Valentine poem, sat doodling at my desk and it sort of found its own flow! Yes destiny is a mystery, and takes mysterious paths in our lifetimes, it sometimes even takes curves and corners that we don't expect! Take care, poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 15, 2019 at 5:51 PM
How deliciously invigorating a heart can be especially on Valentines day, Lovely verse, I say Amen to that.
Proxenos Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 11:07 PM
A lovely reply and comment Pixie Dust, It certainly is and our heart's special day is just around the corner! Couples in love here in South Africa go bananas on this day. Poetry hugs and wishes, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 5:33 PM
as sweet as Valentine candy! Oh, I need to track down one of the poems you told me to see!!
Proxenos Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 11:15 PM
Hi my friend, you actually have to read cry of an angel first and then you'll see why I wrote an answer to a prayer. A lovely description for my Valentine poem thanks Andrea. Don't know if its night or day for you so I think in my next soup mail i'll explain this side of the world's day and night time hours, and it would be great if you could please also Love and poetry hugs, Jenny
Cunningham Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 2:05 AM
Love is in the air, a very romantic verse Jennifer. Tom.
Proxenos Avatar
January 15, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Hi Tom, It certainly is - somehow I think it is becoming more popular for the woman to propose on Valentine Day and this year i think will take the cake. Thanks for the comment Tom. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 14, 2019 at 4:50 PM
sweet interpretation of valentine's , jen... must be love!...huggs
Proxenos Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Hi Nette, Thank-you - it always has been a special day for me and now my husband makes it even more so. Loads of hugs, Jennifer
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