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"Valentine Fatale" Pull the violin strings from the heart like a corset undone there the softest rose, blood red plucked, the thorns played and petals cast as kitty discard from the breast of a Valentine fatale voluptuously falling into the open arms of Love, spilling over into romance like a broken dam ripely held in the bow of cupid smile passion full drawn into the delectable swim twirling swirling down into the warm velvet like moss, so green against reflective sapphire pools, the dangerous sea seen like an inviting ocean to kiss, in such vastness taken, the lost fast falling thick panting eyes mirroring each other in the dance, like a waltz Viennese Love, spilling over, like a broken dam fallen, then, pulled back into the catch, netted and tangled up in the ropes of Rubenesque romance, eye to eye hand to hand, a burning flame ripely held in the bow of cupid smiles, incandescent fiery twin arrows, the well lit, seduction (LadyLabyrinth/2023)

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Date: 2/12/2023 11:46:00 AM
absolutely....line by line this limn is pure enchantment....the depth of love's embrace pulls one deeper and deeper into the greatest of all gifts, the ability to experience love, all of its heavenly vortex....more so, the joy in knowing....romance lives yet in this quill...there is the existence of a rose in this fettered world of banality....
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/12/2023 12:23:00 PM
I had a moment, must have been the music. thank you.
Date: 2/11/2023 8:08:00 AM
I enjoyed your "Valentine Fatale" write. "Love, spilling over," is a wonderful line. Love can mean many different things to different people. Happy Valentine's Day as you write away.....................
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/11/2023 12:21:00 PM
merci Mme Goldsmith. certainement.
Date: 2/11/2023 3:05:00 AM
"...Could I revive within me Her symphony and song, To such a deep delight ’twould win me, That with music loud and long..."
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/11/2023 3:24:00 AM
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/dam
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/11/2023 3:24:00 AM
well. adverb, adjective, noun
Date: 2/11/2023 1:14:00 AM
Erik Satie "Gnossienne No.1" (Extended)
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/11/2023 1:24:00 AM
https://youtu.be/F1dTv_WsMRI
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/11/2023 1:15:00 AM
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gnossiennes
Date: 2/11/2023 1:04:00 AM
Tchaikovsky, "Valse Sentimentale"
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Date: 2/11/2023 1:05:00 AM
https://youtu.be/rUuusqy50yk

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