Richard Lamoureux Poet Verse

Valentine Elipp

You my Valentine will know my love
I anticipate our ecstasy 
My present expresses true desire

Not an ordinary kind of gift
For you, roses are not good enough
I wish for you to feel like a queen

I prepared a place for us to bathe
Candles light the way to our Grotto
Scented perfume permeates the air

Let us enter into paradise
Freeing ourself from Earthly garments
Drifting to a place beyond this world

Feel my warm hands caress your body
My Tongue longs to taste your sweet nectar 
Allow your flower to bloom for me

Writhe until your screams pierce the night sky
Experience the depth of your being
Travel on waves of euphoria 

I choose to be a patient lover
Witnessing the quickening of time
Seeing colour rise upon your chest

You wrap your legs around my body
Needing me to penetrate your force
and I am powerless to resist

Even if we live a million years
There is so much more to discover
I promise the best is yet to come!



For Gigno's Valentine Elipp contest

Oops I did it wrong, I wrote it for a the contest but I understand if it's not chosen.
I thought that it was nine syllables per line.

I have nine syllables per line and nine stanza's 
I think I will call this form 99

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis March 3, 2016 at 3:10 PM A winner promising pure love. Richard Lamoureux March 3, 2016 at 4:24 PM Thanks Iris.

Funom Makama March 2, 2016 at 7:58 AM What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7 Richard Lamoureux March 2, 2016 at 10:07 AM Thanks Funom, do check out my most recent poem.

Constance La France February 29, 2016 at 8:59 AM Richard, I did mine wrong originally also, then had to write another right, well no matter this poem is amazing, I love it 7 ~ Richard Lamoureux February 29, 2016 at 9:02 AM Thanks, I haven't gotten around to giving it another go.

Charmaine Chircop February 28, 2016 at 9:05 AM Intense and beautiful..What more can I say? A magic moment. Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2016 at 9:42 AM Thanks Charmaine. Hugs Rick.

Judy Konos February 26, 2016 at 4:25 PM This is very nice and I must extend to you, the 'Patience of Job" Award. Yes indeed I saw this contest and I didn't even know what they were talking about...but I am a sucker for one or two liners....You always write a winner.... Richard Lamoureux February 28, 2016 at 9:41 AM I added some stanza's. I also wrote a new one. Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 11:33 PM Thanks Judy, not always but I win my share. Goodnight and thanks for the visit.

Eileen Manassian February 26, 2016 at 10:00 AM Richard....it's beautiful.....every line a journey of ecstasy. Your passionate writes are top notch. A man who cares to pleasure a woman like that is a keeper. Mary is blessed. Eileen Manassian February 28, 2016 at 1:18 AM Love it...way to go!!! Richard Lamoureux February 27, 2016 at 11:50 PM I added some stanza's. I also wrote a new one. Eileen Manassian February 26, 2016 at 10:30 AM Lovemaking anywhere is pretty awesome, but you're right! The grotto reference was incredible. We have a grotto here in Lebanon that was being considered for one of the modern wonders of the world....it's awesome. Geita Grotto. Look out up... Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 10:12 AM ;0) thanks Eileen. Water and love making are an incredible combination.

Jan Allison February 26, 2016 at 4:04 AM Very beautiful and romantic Richard:-) hugs Jan xx Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 8:56 AM Thanks Jan.;0)

Red Fiery February 26, 2016 at 2:53 AM Now, this is my kind of poem....Whistle ! whistle ! Whistle ! I simply enjoyed...reading this. Richard , you write so well...I still need to learn a lot ! Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 8:55 AM We are all in need of learning Red. Thanks for the thoughtful comment and visit.

Nette Onclaud February 25, 2016 at 11:55 PM you make me reel with this deep, affectionate write, dear rich... lovely!..huggs Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 8:54 AM Thanks Nette, what more can a power ask for? Thanks and a big hug.

Timothy Hicks February 25, 2016 at 10:53 PM Very intense and passionate... "Still I promise, better nights to come!" ... that's a strong promise. I hope you can live up to it ;) Richard Lamoureux February 26, 2016 at 8:53 AM Ha ha! In the immortal words of Thomas the Choo choo Train "I Think I can, I Think I can!!"

Andrea Dietrich February 25, 2016 at 9:07 PM Quite a passionate valentine, my friend. Hmmm,I understood the directions for this contest differently Gosh, I was just seeing how others did it with a few syllables per line. I hope it does not matter!! You did a great job. Richard Lamoureux February 25, 2016 at 11:47 PM I think it's suppose to be nine syllables per line unless I read it wrong.