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Valentine Elipp

You my Valentine will know my love I anticipate our ecstasy My present expresses true desire Not an ordinary kind of gift For you, roses are not good enough I wish for you to feel like a queen I prepared a place for us to bathe Candles light the way to our Grotto Scented perfume permeates the air Let us enter into paradise Freeing ourself from Earthly garments Drifting to a place beyond this world Feel my warm hands caress your body My Tongue longs to taste your sweet nectar Allow your flower to bloom for me Writhe until your screams pierce the night sky Experience the depth of your being Travel on waves of euphoria I choose to be a patient lover Witnessing the quickening of time Seeing colour rise upon your chest You wrap your legs around my body Needing me to penetrate your force and I am powerless to resist Even if we live a million years There is so much more to discover I promise the best is yet to come! For Gigno's Valentine Elipp contest Oops I did it wrong, I wrote it for a the contest but I understand if it's not chosen. I thought that it was nine syllables per line. I have nine syllables per line and nine stanza's I think I will call this form 99

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Date: 3/3/2016 3:10:00 PM
A winner promising pure love.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2016 4:24:00 PM
Thanks Iris.
Date: 3/2/2016 7:58:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/2/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Funom, do check out my most recent poem.
Date: 2/29/2016 8:59:00 AM
Richard, I did mine wrong originally also, then had to write another right, well no matter this poem is amazing, I love it 7 ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/29/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thanks, I haven't gotten around to giving it another go.
Date: 2/28/2016 9:05:00 AM
Intense and beautiful..What more can I say? A magic moment.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2016 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/26/2016 4:25:00 PM
This is very nice and I must extend to you, the 'Patience of Job" Award. Yes indeed I saw this contest and I didn't even know what they were talking about...but I am a sucker for one or two liners....You always write a winner....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/28/2016 9:41:00 AM
I added some stanza's. I also wrote a new one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 11:33:00 PM
Thanks Judy, not always but I win my share. Goodnight and thanks for the visit.
Date: 2/26/2016 10:00:00 AM
Richard....it's beautiful.....every line a journey of ecstasy. Your passionate writes are top notch. A man who cares to pleasure a woman like that is a keeper. Mary is blessed.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/28/2016 1:18:00 AM
Love it...way to go!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2016 11:50:00 PM
I added some stanza's. I also wrote a new one.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/26/2016 10:30:00 AM
Lovemaking anywhere is pretty awesome, but you're right! The grotto reference was incredible. We have a grotto here in Lebanon that was being considered for one of the modern wonders of the world....it's awesome. Geita Grotto. Look out up...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 10:12:00 AM
;0) thanks Eileen. Water and love making are an incredible combination.
Date: 2/26/2016 4:04:00 AM
Very beautiful and romantic Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 8:56:00 AM
Thanks Jan.;0)
Date: 2/26/2016 2:53:00 AM
Now, this is my kind of poem....Whistle ! whistle ! Whistle ! I simply enjoyed...reading this. Richard , you write so well...I still need to learn a lot !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 8:55:00 AM
We are all in need of learning Red. Thanks for the thoughtful comment and visit.
Date: 2/25/2016 11:55:00 PM
you make me reel with this deep, affectionate write, dear rich... lovely!..huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 8:54:00 AM
Thanks Nette, what more can a power ask for? Thanks and a big hug.
Date: 2/25/2016 10:53:00 PM
Very intense and passionate... "Still I promise, better nights to come!" ... that's a strong promise. I hope you can live up to it ;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2016 8:53:00 AM
Ha ha! In the immortal words of Thomas the Choo choo Train "I Think I can, I Think I can!!"
Date: 2/25/2016 9:07:00 PM
Quite a passionate valentine, my friend. Hmmm,I understood the directions for this contest differently Gosh, I was just seeing how others did it with a few syllables per line. I hope it does not matter!! You did a great job.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/25/2016 11:47:00 PM
I think it's suppose to be nine syllables per line unless I read it wrong.

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