Valentine Attributes

Valentine Attributes 

Crusading dictations
Gathering together
Professing devotions
Arousing emotions

Holiday flourishing
Underlined greediness
Commercial dictated
Composing emotions

Weariness withstanding
Tirelessly pretending
Valentine’s forgotten
Closeted emotions



Copywrite @ Debra Squyres 2013
Writing inspired by Seren Roberts Three Syllable writing on the blog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 7:47 PM
Great poem Deb. It is not what it used to be. It is like nothing has the same meaning anymore. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Rutherford Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 4:47 PM
You did a wonderful job with this one Debra .For me too, this used to be our special day ,anniversary day as well. You are right when you said it changed for you. I agree it does not seem important any more .Just a bit sad. Hugs Anne
Roberts Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Wow Debs you managed it without a problem, well done, thanks for the mention....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:28 PM
Wow you did well with this Debs xx
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Unique way to make your poem Debra, love it! - You're already on top of the winner list! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 11:27 AM
This is a tremendous and an amazing write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 9:35 AM
You speak the truth. This time of year puts so much pressure and expectations on people. For so many it is a very sad day.
Squyres Avatar
February 3, 2013 at 10:51 AM
Use to embrace it...but when I lost my valentine...seems I lost my heart for this holiday, among others. Blessed be.
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