Valentine

And whenever skies are gray There's one thing I can say To let your heart surround me I’m so glad you found me Be my Valentine And I’ll love you Till the world’s no longer mine And when life’s unsatisfied For all the world has cried And darkness seems to blind me You’r the light to find me Be my Valentine And I’ll light you Till forever, we will shine I may wonder where you are And then I’ll see a star And know you’re here to guide me Your heart beats inside me All that you can give My Valentine For you and only you, I live

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/21/2023 7:26:00 PM

Mike, here's to the fulfillment of your every wish. ~ Val and Tyne

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank so much GW!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/21/2023 6:55:00 PM

Wonderful Poem, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Harry!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/21/2023 12:05:00 PM

Great love poem worth a valentine's invitation.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Victor!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2023 9:58:00 AM

This is really sweet. A wonderful Valentine.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2023 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Andrea!!

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/20/2023 12:56:00 PM

Your poem is so beautiful, written of love as big as the Universe, the light to find you, the heart beating within you, is Love. How intensely beautiful, bright, and gentle as a sweet breeze. I love your precious poem, Mike! Another petal in my pocket from your beautiful ever-growing garden of beautiful poetry! A fave for sure!

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2023 5:51:00 PM

That’s so very nice of you BJ! I appreciate your kind words, Happy Friday xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/20/2023 2:23:00 AM

A very passionate Valentine poem Mike, yes Valentine's Day is almost upon us, I foresee this write taking a top place in the contest, Good luck my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2023 10:12:00 AM

You are very kind Jennifer, Thank you xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/19/2023 8:52:00 AM

Very romantic verse Mike, your two hearts are beating as one, there is no better feeling. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2023 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom, a Happy Weekend to you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/19/2023 5:31:00 AM

You capture her heart in this loving, romantic write, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/20/2023 10:11:00 AM

Thank you as always Vijay for your kind words !