Premiere Contest WinnerValentine

On the night we first met, stars were shining bright Somehow, I knew we'd become more than friends I offered you a yellow rose in the glow of moonlight while I was thinking, "I hope this feeling never ends." Six months later we tallked about hopes and dreams I gave you six pink roses as we gazed at stars above We shared tender kisses beneath pale moonbeams and for the first time, we spoke sweet words of love. At eight months we were planning a future together Inside a bouquet of twelve red roses, I had tied a ring We married in the summer on a hillside of heather and today you told me there'd be a baby in Spring. Our child is your Valentine's gift for me, so I have two dozen white roses and delicate baby's breath in a vase. Beribboned for my Valentine in a shade of baby blue. May we always be content, wrapped in love's embrace. January 18, 2023 Valentine Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
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Radice Avatar
August 15, 2025 at 11:57 PM
Your poems are awash with romance Lin and this is a great example of your signature style. Nice one. Cheers - Gary
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 8:53 AM
My "signature style"... that's a very nice thing to tell me, Gary and I graciously accept it as a compliment. Thank you, kind friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 10:14 AM
A beautiful Valentine’s poem Lin, congratulations on your trophy win… Belle
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Thanks so very much, Belle.
Anaya Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win Lin! May you always be content, wrapped in love's embrace.
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Thank you for such sweet comments, Anaya.
Cunningham Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Back with congratulations Lin on your trophy win. Tom
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Thank you, Tom.
Rose  Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 10:11 AM
You gave me more than roses, you gave me poetry of love. You stood out from the rest, guess you must be the best. Thank you, from my heart :)
Lane Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 4:29 AM
Thank you. I appreciate the top win.
Daniel Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 8:15 PM
This is so romantic, Lin, hope Vie likes this:)
Lane Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Thanks so very much, Jo. If she doesn't, it's enough that you and others do. ;)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Hello Lin Lang, oh so romantic. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Hello Lin Lang, you are welcome. Hugs. enjoy your day.
Lane Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Hello, Darlene and thank you for the comment and hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 9:09 AM
You certainly know how to write romantic poetry Lin, this is top class. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Lane Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Thank you very much, Tom. I'm licking my wounds over another contest at the moment, but that's how it goes. I'm considering following Jenna's example and just pooh them all.
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