Valen-Time

Valen-time  a woman's perspective 
Inspired by one of Jan Alison's recent writes


You've given me red roses
carnations violets too
You even gave me tulips
To show your love was true

But now these days it seems
that the garden must be dead
'Cause the only kind of (flower)
that I get's for making bread
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gulley Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 5:53 AM
An awesome write, Jerry. I agree with Jan. I like baking too.
Teagan Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 7:00 AM
I think gardens die when people get married lol ...cute poem Jerry
Lamoureux Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Ha ha, this is clever and cute.
Smith Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Lol...Some days bread is all I deserve
Allison Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 7:03 AM
ha ha ha thanks for making me smile Jerry - we have never celebrated Valentines Day in the 27 years we have been together - a bag of flour would be much more use to me as I love baking lol:-) hugs jan xx
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