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Vain Accuser

There was an infidel* in his vain mind who accused God as unfair to mankind along his schemer’s route with awful gloomy pout… then a blind child sharing gifts… he did find.
*1Timothy 5:8 But if any provide not for his own, and specially for those of his own house, he hath denied the faith, and is worse than an infidel. March 4, 2021 Edited on February 21, 2023 5th place, "Put Your Best (ONE) Limerick Forward (be like Rico Leffanta)" Limerick Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich; judged on 3/13/2023.

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Date: 3/13/2023 6:29:00 PM
Hope lesson learnt! Good one!!!
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Date: 3/13/2023 4:28:00 PM
Your rhyme and meter were mostly impeccable, Beata. Thanks for entering and congrats.
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