VAGABOND

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Beata Agustin.

Title Chosen: Vagabond

For the Contest: Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words

Sponsored by: Constance La France

Form Used: Diminished Hexaverse with Alliteration

Date Written: April 1, 2024

"When thou tillest the ground, it shall not henceforth yield unto thee her strength; a fugitive and a vagabond shalt thou be in the earth." Genesis 4:12 of the King James Bible Wandering nowhere Weary to find home worn-out and anxious worried, guilty of waywardness from God… Willful, soul feels worthless as faith wavers, seeking way to the Lord… Watchful for wisdom, I'm welcomed to… Where God wants me… Win! April 1, 2024 4th place, "Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 4/7/2024

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France

Date: 4/7/2024 3:09:00 PM

Beata, congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Your "Vagabond" is a wonderful write. Great Ending... Love It... Yes, He wants us to win... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/2/2024 5:13:00 AM

love your take on 'vagabond.' Wish I'd thought of that Biblical verse. Inspirational words as always. Best wishes with the contest, Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/2/2024 12:01:00 AM

Wonderful. God bless you, love, Gina